Better than Chocolate_Part 2

Feb 14, 2012 09:55



Title: Better than Chocolate

Chapter: 2/2

Pairing: Tora x Shou x Saga x…Yuki!

Rating: NC-17

Genre: PWP, BDSM, romance

Warnings: male x male, sex, BDSM (bondage, spanking, humiliation)…

Summary: It's Valentine's Day for our threesome, and what better way to celebrate it than with a night of kinky fun...

Comments: So you guys liked the first part? Good, ( Read more... )

bdsm, alice nine, chaptered, fanfiction, tora x shou x saga, lolita23q, yuki, smut, pwp

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Comments 27

xme_chanx February 14 2012, 18:51:15 UTC
I'll have to give a better one later, when my brain isn't quite so much a pile of goo on the floor. *A*
HOTHOTHOTHOTHOTHOTHOTHOTHOTHOT.
Those boys... Tora is a lucky man.

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aleksiina_26 February 15 2012, 23:08:11 UTC
Sorry I melted your brain haha XD I know right, he's a lucky bastard, three hot men bending over backwards (and foreward XD) to please him...Glad you enjoyed, thanks for reading and commenting xoxo

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eimininja February 14 2012, 19:40:46 UTC
That was HOT yum yum yum
Lucky Yuki, and lucky Tora, not many boyfriends would give you a sexy sex slave for valentines day XD

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aleksiina_26 February 15 2012, 23:09:16 UTC
One can only hope to be as lucky lol XD Thanks for reading xoxo

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puss_nd_boots February 15 2012, 01:42:35 UTC
WOW. Just WOW. This is hot and deliciously kinky, of course - the mental images here burn your way into your mind. But what elevates this story above your garden-variety kinkfic is the underlying theme of trust. There is so much of it here on display - Saga and Shou are secure enough with Tora's feelings for him that they comfortably bring another man into their relationship for the night, without fear that it would interfere with what they have. No wonder Yuki was in awe of their relationship in the end. (Ha, I also like that he was a bit stunned at the depth of their devotion to kink. I'll bet he wasn't expecting it from Alice Nine, the "nice boy" band!) In short, in its own way, this fic was more about love than the vast majority of "conventional" Valentine fics are. Nice job!

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aleksiina_26 February 15 2012, 23:16:26 UTC
I think the whole perverted/kinky side of them that I portray is only MORE fun to write considering they have such a wholesome image XD And I know from personal experience that usually, the more clean cut they look, the kinkier they are between the sheets...ahem...

And of course, there is no polyamory, or kink, without profound love and complete trust, which is central in this series of fictions. I took advantage of Yuki's outsider perspective to shed even more light on the mechanics of it all, and also to give an excuse to Tora to word how much he loves his two boys...fluff haha XD

Your sweetness is making me squeal as usual, thank you so much for reading me and taking time to comment so nicely, I really appreciate it big time. I hope you enjoy my ShouPon fic just as much ;) lots of love xoxo

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clawsgalore February 15 2012, 05:55:01 UTC
*___* (dead) ~ <3

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aleksiina_26 February 15 2012, 23:18:03 UTC
Oh no :O!!!! I'm gonna have to revive you with a shot of fluff straight to the heart XD Thanks for commenting xoxo

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gypsygrrl420 February 15 2012, 13:19:56 UTC
Very, very sexy! I do like Yuki in here, and will be more than happy to see him pop up from time to time in the boys' lives. And I, personally, would love more threesome fics!

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aleksiina_26 February 15 2012, 23:20:48 UTC
Hopefully he makes a couple cameos from time to time, I really want him to get some one on one with Tora at some point...maybe take the kink even deeper, who knows...And there will be more threesomes, of course ;) Thanks for reading and commenting xoxo

btw, how is your heart doing? I hope that appointment went well xoxo

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gypsygrrl420 February 16 2012, 00:28:37 UTC
I think some one-on-one would be very well received, lol. And you should know by now that I love seeing new fic by you posted!

As for the heart...well, they made me wait 5 hours after my appointment time to see the doctor, and he seemed pretty dismissive. Ordered a stress test (riiight...that's not gonna suck!) and a Rx for blood pressure meds--funnily enough, elevated BP for me is what most people consider normal. This stuff knocks me right on my ass...but hey, no more shuddery feeling in my chest, so I suppose that's good, right?
All in all, I'm doing alright I suppose. *g* How are you?

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aleksiina_26 February 16 2012, 18:00:19 UTC
Stress test...yuck -___- I hate how they give you appointments and get on your ass about being on time and then just end up making you wait, seriously, its just rude. And BP meds just suck big time, I took some for my very low blood pressure and it just made me feel worse, I'm happy my situation just regulated itself eventually. I hope it gets better for you too :) I've been doing alright, valentine's day is the time of year where I play the understanding psych help with all my forever alone friends that just cant seem to deal with it (unlike me XD) And/or give disastrous relationship advice. I have no clue why they keep coming back to me for that...

All in all, not too bad.

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