Awww, Tank's coming out of his shell. I like his take on Johnny Smith, too (that's kind of how I see Johnny myself, a slightly pompous goody-goody).
I love how quiet and patient Stella is. She knows when to sit and listen but she's also a woman of action.
And Bella as the Grunt step mother is awesome. I like seeing the General happy (he's one of my favorites). And Buck. . .so CUTE (I like that he's still chubby).
Thank you! :) Now we just have to see what's Johnny's side of the story *winks*
I decided to tell about the Grunts here, because they will be showing up later on, so it was good moment to give some background on his family, and btw this is one the first I actually and seriously settle Buzz with someone, Bella its juts soooo perfect for him. They love each other insanely! LOL
and awwww BUCK! I love sweet, Buck ... he's matter of anther story, but he's chubby when he's happy :) (tho looses weight when he gets depressed.... lol)
I like how Bella is going to be their step mother. I giggled when I saw her, because for some strange reason I think it kind of makes sense. Buck is so cute in that hat! But then again, it's Buck we're talking about and he's cute any way you have him. I like Tank talking about how come he doesn't like Johnny, and realizing that all the hate he has for him is pretty stupid.
"Stella struggled looking for the right way to express the way she felt, the correct words, the proper phrases… but Tank knew the perfect one." -Aww, I love that line! I'm so glad they finally kissed. :)
I'm so happy you liked that line :) I took me for ever to finish this part, I re-wrote it like ten times and at the end i was pretty much ... JUST SHUT UP!... so they did... lol . It was almost a joke to myself at first, but then I thought it was actually pretty fitting :P I never imagined Bella/Buzz at first and it was just so random, they just met in game on a welcome wagon and got all obsessed with each other rofl
Hi, I just read all five installments and makin' my first comment. I don't even have Uni so this is all pretty interesting. I did read somewhere that Stella was supposed to be a full-blooded alien.
Anyway, I'm interested in how she's trying to discover her origins, and she and Tank are very cute together. Random pairings are fun. I know I had fun with my recent random pairing.
Also, can I say I'm impressed that you're writing a story in a second language? I mean, wow. I'm trying to imagine if I tried to write my stuff in Spanish or Japanese. Oy. Actually, I did try to translate a short story I wrote once into Japanese (was gonna send it to a friend) and WOW it took me forever. I never did finish that one.
Thank you! :) Stella does suppose to be full-blooded alien, at least she is totally alien according to simdna, and nice that you comment on that, because that could be an important matter about Stella on this story *winks* Tho it is also true that according to simdna Jill is not even slightly alien and she should be right?? lol (i don't like to think Jenny was having fun somewhere else, so I always give Jill some recessive alien genes anyways lol
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I love Bella and the General together! And I'm also glad to see Tank opening up to Stella some... and good that Stella was honest and told him about her plans to meet with Johnny.
I totally feel for Tank with the teenage rivalry with Johnny. Hopefully he'll be able to get past it soon.
well ... if you need to tell your grouchy boyfriend you planning to meet with his archenemy, the best moment to do so its when he's bit tipsy, right?? rofl
There's is a bit more on their rivalry, some of the clues on this chapter may tell something about it, but I'll leave the honors to Johnny Smith on that one.
It's probably really dorky of me, but of everything I've enjoyed about the story to date? I got a little spastic giggle out of Alexander showing up for dinner along with Bella up there. Ah, the little things that make my morning :3
Hope that means you do like the story :) Alex actually spends more time in Strangetown than in Pleasantview on my game LOL I like him a lot, so i keep him close ;) Glad to cheer up your morning :D Thanks for reading Cheers! :)
I've noticed in the last while the "character" of Tank has changed in many stories. He used to be a rather fierce character and now people seem to enjoy writing him with some tenderness.
Maybe because we all get to know him better :D I didn't even like the Grunts at first, but I can't have enough of them now :) And besides, its very had for me to imagine the sims I like, being 'bad' in any way, not even the ones that are supposed to be like Buzz, Olive or the Beakers lol
I'm really happy you're enjoying the story Thanks for reading :) Cheers!
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I love how quiet and patient Stella is. She knows when to sit and listen but she's also a woman of action.
And Bella as the Grunt step mother is awesome. I like seeing the General happy (he's one of my favorites). And Buck. . .so CUTE (I like that he's still chubby).
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Now we just have to see what's Johnny's side of the story *winks*
I decided to tell about the Grunts here, because they will be showing up later on, so it was good moment to give some background on his family, and btw this is one the first I actually and seriously settle Buzz with someone, Bella its juts soooo perfect for him. They love each other insanely! LOL
and awwww BUCK! I love sweet, Buck ... he's matter of anther story, but he's chubby when he's happy :) (tho looses weight when he gets depressed.... lol)
Thanks for reading
Cheers! :D
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Buck is so cute in that hat! But then again, it's Buck we're talking about and he's cute any way you have him.
I like Tank talking about how come he doesn't like Johnny, and realizing that all the hate he has for him is pretty stupid.
"Stella struggled looking for the right way to express the way she felt, the correct words, the proper phrases… but Tank knew the perfect one."
-Aww, I love that line! I'm so glad they finally kissed. :)
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I took me for ever to finish this part, I re-wrote it like ten times and at the end i was pretty much ... JUST SHUT UP!... so they did... lol . It was almost a joke to myself at first, but then I thought it was actually pretty fitting :P
I never imagined Bella/Buzz at first and it was just so random, they just met in game on a welcome wagon and got all obsessed with each other rofl
Thanks for reading :D
Cheers!
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Anyway, I'm interested in how she's trying to discover her origins, and she and Tank are very cute together. Random pairings are fun. I know I had fun with my recent random pairing.
Also, can I say I'm impressed that you're writing a story in a second language? I mean, wow. I'm trying to imagine if I tried to write my stuff in Spanish or Japanese. Oy. Actually, I did try to translate a short story I wrote once into Japanese (was gonna send it to a friend) and WOW it took me forever. I never did finish that one.
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Stella does suppose to be full-blooded alien, at least she is totally alien according to simdna, and nice that you comment on that, because that could be an important matter about Stella on this story *winks*
Tho it is also true that according to simdna Jill is not even slightly alien and she should be right?? lol (i don't like to think Jenny was having fun somewhere else, so I always give Jill some recessive alien genes anyways lol ( ... )
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I totally feel for Tank with the teenage rivalry with Johnny. Hopefully he'll be able to get past it soon.
Great update!
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There's is a bit more on their rivalry, some of the clues on this chapter may tell something about it, but I'll leave the honors to Johnny Smith on that one.
Thanks for reading! :D
Cheers
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Alex actually spends more time in Strangetown than in Pleasantview on my game LOL I like him a lot, so i keep him close ;)
Glad to cheer up your morning :D
Thanks for reading
Cheers! :)
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Very sweet. :D
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I didn't even like the Grunts at first, but I can't have enough of them now :)
And besides, its very had for me to imagine the sims I like, being 'bad' in any way, not even the ones that are supposed to be like Buzz, Olive or the Beakers lol
I'm really happy you're enjoying the story
Thanks for reading :)
Cheers!
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