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aledstrange

Creatures of Love - Ending/Epilogue (Part 2)

Feb 01, 2010 17:55

"Creatures of Love"
A Strangetown Bachelorette Challenge

PART 2 -- Read PART 1 here

Warnings: NSFW // Lots of picts

( Don't click here until you've read part 1! )

nonstory:creatures, creatures, simself, strangetown

Comments 33

sadieg79 February 1 2010, 23:57:00 UTC

Oh, that was cool! I did start to wonder if you were doing a Black Widow challenge or something, the way it was going. Great job :)

aledstrange February 2 2010, 12:44:30 UTC

yes, it was a bit like a challenge within a challenge. LOL
I wanted to do something unexpected to end the bachelorette challenge, but without actually ruining it (too much lol) XD

Glad you liked it. :D

cindyanne1 February 2 2010, 03:13:06 UTC

OMG THIS WAS AMAZING!!! *applauds*

I love all the pictures... the poses were excellent! And I totally laughed at Nervous when he kept not dying lolol! Perfect!

Very cool that it was all a dream for poor Ale... and that everything worked out so well in the end. Nice to see all the little updates on everyone too!

Bravo!! :D

aledstrange February 2 2010, 13:37:37 UTC

Thank you so much!! I'm really happy you enjoyed this, it was totally inspired by you! ^_^

And LOL Yes, Nervous couldn't just die. Not only he was a zombie, therefore already dead, but I always have this idea that a son-of-death-itself must be very hard to kill!! XD

Glad you like the real ending too. I struggled for a while between just making them happy, or actually kill Lazlo (after getting pregnant first) and leave her with P at the end, but I really liked Lazlo for her (in this take, at least :P)

remisims February 2 2010, 03:38:27 UTC

Absolutely brilliant! :D

aledstrange February 2 2010, 13:45:09 UTC

Glad you liked it! ^_^
Thanks for reading and commenting! :D

morkmork February 2 2010, 04:14:33 UTC

This was so brilliant. I enjoyed every bit of this challenge. I can't wait to see what you do with Pascal!

aledstrange February 2 2010, 13:49:04 UTC

Thank you so much! :D
Not sure yet if I'll do something with Pas, tho. I want to, but also have a lot of other pending sim-projects I should be working on. lol (sim-add is a serious thing rofl)

simtopi February 2 2010, 04:21:55 UTC

AWwwwwwwww this was brilliant. Even as people were dying left right and center, I couldn't help but laugh... maybe it was the sadistic part of me, but you did it all so well. Poor Allie... but LOL. :D :D :D

aledstrange February 2 2010, 14:20:01 UTC

I'm really happy to read that. :)

It's good to know that it was still fun to read, even with all the deaths and Allie crying like 80% of the time, because I wasn't sure how would it look for the readers.

Some parts were pretty ridiculous, imo, (like: ZOMG! Vid fell from a stair, and now he's laying there all dead in my greenhouse, so I'll get in bed with Ajay!! ROFL!!! - NO SENSE AT ALL!!! XD), but I didn't want to be all so terrible either.

Glad you liked it and thanks for reading!! :D

simtopi February 2 2010, 19:45:47 UTC

Well I'll be honest, at first it was pretty sad when Laszlo and P-Bot died... then when Loki kicked it, it got a little suspicious. And yeah, I think by the time Vid died, I figured you must have just been having fun. ;)