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Oct 30, 2007 01:15

When I was just into my teens and friend of mine and I used to hang around this bike shop in Folsom name of Bicycles Plus. We were heavy into the BMX and when we were too lazy to ride, we'd go to the shop and laze around. We'd hang out in the back with the older fellas that worked there who were also riders. We looked up to them because they were ( Read more... )

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meredithleigh October 30 2007, 16:25:46 UTC
I am not sure that I have ever actually met you, but I am sure that I love you and you need to write books. For money. Or be like one of the elders in an Indian tribe who has an entire village gather around him just to hear his tales of love, victory, and prosthetic limbs.

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aleceiffel13 October 31 2007, 16:31:23 UTC
Why thank you, I'm honored

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ehuscribbles October 30 2007, 16:49:22 UTC
(told you so. the trick is to keep it up when there is a day gig) ~mikey

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aleceiffel13 October 31 2007, 16:32:05 UTC
Thanks chief.

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jeffry_wynne October 30 2007, 17:07:17 UTC
WOW!!! And I thought you were brilliant last Saturday night!

WOW.

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aleceiffel13 October 31 2007, 16:32:39 UTC
Thanks buddy.
Your review is pending, by the way, FINALLY.

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ellnra22 October 30 2007, 17:14:19 UTC
I laughed out loud at the last line. good stuff as usual.

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aleceiffel13 October 31 2007, 16:33:05 UTC
Thank you.

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surf_deep October 30 2007, 18:26:07 UTC
I'm not sure whats more creepy to me, the fact that I see every detail of your stories in my minds eye with every vivid detail(not from my imagination but rather your magnificent attention to detail in the form of words) or the fact that I know of and used to hang out with these characters in the same area, just possibly in a ever so slight time shift. Bicycles Plus, Dehart, Nate the Mormon....great story.

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aleceiffel13 October 31 2007, 16:34:13 UTC
Thanks man, I really appreciate it.

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