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15-Minute Ficlet: Constraint
Feb 15, 2011 13:18
From Ty's prompt
here
, "Yearning." Probably faeapoc.The yearning was nearly unbearable (
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prompt: 15minfic
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verse: faeapoc
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eseme
February 16 2011, 04:14:00 UTC
Meanie! Very annoying place to end it.
That's the beginning, not the end.
Typo:
she’d gotten unused to making decisions, content to allow him to steer
Needs a period at the end.
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addergoole
February 16 2011, 13:57:25 UTC
*grin* 15-minute fic... that's where the 15-minutes ended!
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eseme
February 16 2011, 23:05:04 UTC
ARGH!
Clearly, we need longer minutes!
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aldersprig
February 16 2011, 23:16:44 UTC
*giggle*
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That's the beginning, not the end.
Typo:
she’d gotten unused to making decisions, content to allow him to steer
Needs a period at the end.
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Reply
Clearly, we need longer minutes!
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