Comments | albion_unbound: Crossed Wires (6/8)

fugaziclash in albion_unbound

Crossed Wires (6/8)

Dec 15, 2007 21:20

Part 6

Peter hadn’t quite known what to expect the next time he saw Carl in the harsh light of day. Perhaps he’d thought that he would be somehow different after that night in which Peter’s preconceived opinions of the boy had been so thoroughly shaken. Maybe he had even toyed with the notion that Carl would leave behind all his shallow, ( Read more... )

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dreams579 December 15 2007, 23:06:36 UTC

oh... oh... oh....

*tries not to sob with pete*

you stole my words! *whimpers*

xxx

fugaziclash December 16 2007, 11:25:37 UTC

Sorry! *runs and gives them back*

Thanks for commenting!

lizachief December 15 2007, 23:19:52 UTC

From pornographic smoking in the last bit to pornographic chocolate :D Carl does get some gorgeous descriptions

The fact that that Peter Doherty was him took a bit of getting used to as well, although he’d been Peter Doherty for ages and it hadn’t ever confused him before now

This made me lol, it reminded me of me when drunk

fugaziclash December 16 2007, 11:28:50 UTC

Thank you :D.

I actually added that second bit in after post-exam celebrations....so I quite possibly may have been a tad drunk at the time ;P.

Get in the midset and all that, eh? Glad you liked it!

elisaren December 16 2007, 01:25:30 UTC

noooooo! it was all going so well and now it's gone so very wrong :( fix it fix it please! still really liked this, though.

fugaziclash December 16 2007, 11:30:17 UTC

Ah...I'm a bit of a sucker for happy endings me'self so you have my honest word (for what it's worth) that I shall fix it...eventually ;p.

Couldn't make it too easy for them could I? ;P

fuckingyouth December 16 2007, 05:41:05 UTC

bloody hell so fucking beautiful
so sad, Oh my I hope Carl doesn't gets to bloody depressed and does something, well I actually would like that, but Bilo would've to act quickly

fugaziclash December 16 2007, 11:32:02 UTC

Oh...don't give me ideas... *evil laugh*

Very glad indeedy you liked this :D.

notquitearcadia December 16 2007, 07:23:02 UTC

This is lovely - so intense. Poor boys though. Sort them out before Carl does something too stupid. xx

fugaziclash December 16 2007, 11:33:23 UTC

Thank'ee very much. :D

I promise I will sort them out *cross my heart and hope to die* before Carl (or Peter)does something stupid though...hmmm...not so sure about that one m'afraid. ;P