Comments | albion1919: Kept Woman Drabble "Separate"

albion1919

Kept Woman Drabble "Separate"

Dec 10, 2008 00:16

Just something I've wrote quick. So much KW at the moment lol :\

1st person POV from a grown up Nadia.

( Bang, Bang... )

kept woman 'verse, saya, drabble: separate

Comments 6

razycrandomgirl December 10 2008, 03:05:43 UTC

=-O

Shined instead of burned. :(

Oh my

YES! Nadia's POV! YES YES YES!

albion1919 December 10 2008, 11:17:56 UTC

Older Nadia's POV ;)

cruiscin_lan December 20 2008, 19:56:16 UTC

I love that Nancy Sinatra song, and you incorporated it so well in such a short piece!

albion1919 December 20 2008, 20:01:13 UTC

Thanks! Yeah I love it to! That song fits this ship very well ;)

bellonablack June 20 2009, 20:32:09 UTC

Aww...

This makes me sad because Maya is a good person, and this kind of ruined her relationship with her daughter. At first, I imagine it would be hard to see her close to Gabriel (Sylar).

But I can get why Nadia loved her dad. SO CONFLICTED. O_O This is complex, this subject. You've brought a lot to it.

albion1919 June 20 2009, 20:45:45 UTC

She is a good person but the things that she has to live with and keep inside has taken a toll. I don't think ruined, more strained and restrictive. Very hard, then she gets soft with him but then berates herself for letting it happen. She feels that she shouldn’t ease up because he is the one in the wrong. But only she knows it and it casts her unfairly in a bad light.

Thanks! Yup it really is! Huge can of worms waiting to be unleashed on poor Nadia...