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[albion1919]

Title: Subterfuge

Characters: Eden/Sylar

Rating: R for swearing.

Word Count: 1,560.

Disclaimer: Do not own.

Summery: Eden is living next door to Chandra Suresh. She begins to suspect Sylar‘s involvement in his life.

Note: Sylar made it seem that Eden knew he couldn’t be hurt with bullets (in Fallout). This chapter is her being witness to this. First of a

Comments

[define_serenity]

Cool! And explanation for Sylar's words in Fallout *does happy dance* that was sooo much needed! This is really great and I can't wait for the next chapter :D *beams*

PS: You do have a few typos here and there (a they that has to be a the) but nothing too serious. Just thought I'd let you know...

[albion1919]

Thank you :)

It bugged me, those words he said. Same with the "You knew what I was and let it continue." I shall be incorporating that line in the future I think…

Spelling: Damn dyslexic brain don't work in the early morning! XD

I'll correct them. :D

[define_serenity]

Oh, I can't wait to read those words :D *though waits patiently*

[albion1919]

Well...Not those words exactly, but more what they imply :)

[albion1919]

Wow! That was so vivid....and even if there wasn't any overt Syden!action, there was still *tension*, and I liked that :D

Thank you me dear! I'm not sure if I should turn it AU and have them...you know ;)

OMG I LOVE IT!!! That's like, the stuff movies are made of. It reminded me of the sixth sense, you know, when Bruce realizes he's dead (oops did I spoil that for anybody? lol).

Thank god for his TK shield! *gasp* He was dead! Nooooooooo! XD

I want to use him as a bed *g*

RAWR!

WOO-HOO LIME GREEN!!! :D

\o/ LIME GREEN FOR THE WIN!!

[albion1919]

There's gonna be a part 2, right???

I have it in meh head, just got to plan it. But I don't have a resolution. And I want that before I post the next chap.To go AU or not...

I haven't read the Shakes yet. My friend let me borrow her book. It's a brick! Would have cost $$$$, and I'm thrifty!

[razycrandomgirl]

Ni-ice! I can just imagine him lying there in his man cardigan and nerdy hair cut. :-) Sleeping.

I liked this story!

[albion1919]

Thanks! :)

I can just imagine him lying there in his man cardigan and nerdy hair cut. :-) Sleeping.

Ohh, this be not Gabriel! Gone are the man cardigans! I had this chat with Ann about his changing fashion style. When he became Sylar his style changed. He started experimenting! I imagine him in this fic: fluffy haired, dark t-shirt, jeans and cowboy boots (yes he wore them!).

[razycrandomgirl]

and cowboy boots (yes he wore them!).

OOOOH NOOO'S! I just hope they're round toe cause the pointy ones kinda freak me out. :-D

I missed some episodes so I didn't see Gambiel (let alone the transformation) until waaaay later.

[albion1919]

[kathrynthegr8]

Wow! That was exciting! I like how e get a glimpse of the past in this and how Eden and Sylar might have met. I can believe that he would save people without even thinking about it, he's done things like that on the show before. This makes me wish Eden was still around, I miss her and so many of the great characters from saeson one.

Very nice.

[albion1919]

Thank you!! (there is other parts after this btw :)

I think he would as well! Oh man I loved her so much! When she died I kept telling myself that if they had a flash back to 6MA then we'd see her again, with Chandra and Gabriel. Sadly not to be :(