Let go

May 06, 2008 20:54

Title: Let go

Characters: Sylar/Maya

Rating: R

Word count: 1,311

Disclaimer: Do not own.

Summery: She lets go of him

Note: Kept Woman fic. This might be the first of 3 chapters. It's a resolution (maybe :P)

Parts: 1, 2

Nothing to suck... )

kept woman 'verse, saya, fic: let go, heroes

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razycrandomgirl May 6 2008, 20:34:12 UTC
=-o.

=-o

=-o

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albion1919 May 6 2008, 20:37:16 UTC
LOL

dun

dun

DUN!

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razycrandomgirl May 6 2008, 20:52:34 UTC
S'gotta do with the blood right? I have a feeling he's been lest than honest and things are about to happen that will bow the lid off. Oh I can't wait!

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albion1919 May 6 2008, 21:10:13 UTC
That and more, for sure. Yeah, oh yepyep. Understatement :x

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albion1919 May 7 2008, 10:52:59 UTC
Guh I know! Yes, wolf-like, he could so pull it off!

Yup! That power is handy until it shows him things he doesn't like :P I hope they have a scene where he's painting and she's all black eyed, it would look cool.

Thanks (I'm nervous lol)

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bellonablack May 7 2008, 10:37:49 UTC
Heh, I know something Sylar could have done: Just take Nadia out with him on a whim if he's looking for a new ability. LOL. Just wander by the room and say: 'Not like you'd care or anything, but I thought I'd take Nadia to work with me today, so...' LOL.

Does Nadia have an ability? ??? XD Excitement. I felt so sorry for her in this fiction. Aww...(I secretly wanted Sylar just to be happy with his kid caring about him...oh well. All or nothing, right.)

Seems she drove him pretty far. I like the comparison to her treatment to him as a spiritual resolution, to avoid negative, almost 'vampiric' in your words, intrusion.

-BB

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albion1919 May 7 2008, 11:04:12 UTC
lol and Maya would beat him up XD (and she's be like "steal abilities from who? They're all dead!" Ahem... ;)

Hmmm, she might. (Aww he does love her, he believes, but he's all depressed and doesn't want her to see him like that...and yeah he hoped Maya just wanted to see him to :x)

*nods* I was reading about NPD and they sometimes go through cycles of deep depression and hide themselves away (a bit like Gabriel did) when they've been hurt. Yup, pretending he doesn't exist would drive him nuts.

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fifmeister May 7 2008, 16:14:24 UTC
Cliffhanger! O.O

That's ingenious of Maya to just be totally indifferent to him, turn off his supply, so to speak. He's really like a toddler--he just wants attention. The second you stop catering to his temper tantrums, he has no idea what to do.

Hope you post the next part soon. :)

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albion1919 May 7 2008, 20:21:44 UTC
Teehee ;)

I think she's spent enough time around him to be a good judge of his character, what makes him tick if you like, lol. *nods* emotionally totally immature like a child.

I've been writing the next part for a few days but I’m still not happy. I might post something else before that.

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dana_serenity May 10 2008, 08:58:18 UTC
WO-OW!!

I don't even have anything else to say, other than that this is amazing and I have to read chappy 2 now.

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albion1919 May 10 2008, 10:52:01 UTC
Thank you!! :D

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