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[albion1919]

Title: Girlfriend. Part 5 (complete)

Characters: Gabriel/Eden.

Rating: R.

Word count: 1,311

Disclaimer: Do not own.

Summery: AU. Eden is a callgirl in this fic and Gabriel her "client"

Note: Does she get out? *whistles*

Parts: 1, 2 , 3, 4,  5

He stands in the same place for hours, watches the window reflected in the mirror as the sun starts to rise,

Comments

[ilovetbag24]

Whoa. Kinda confused. What the hell happened? Did he kill each and every John that she had? Did he kill the person she was indebted to? Wow, Gabriel really loves her!!

This was such a fantastic read!! I jumped for joy seeing that this was ready! You're such a talented writer and I can't wait for another Gabden fic to come to light!!

[albion1919]

Hee, sorry. I wanted it to be ambiguous. So it's totally up to you to decide what he might have done...

OMG thank you! *hugs* If I'm hit with another Gabden bunny I'll do it (got a Syden one in the works…) But I'm going back to Pissed-off!Maya verse now lol

[razycrandomgirl]

I love all that you crammed into this.

I love that it seems like he got everyone on "The List". Holy Crap!

He is a Quiet Wolf. Wonderful, Wonderful! Has she got Stockholm Syndrome now? Poor dear.

ETA: I also like how you used the mirror. I had the image of him sitting outside his mothers room begging her to come out.

I love how this time it's from his perspective. He's so hurt he wanted to cry.

:( he worked his magic on her. *tisk tisk*

he broke her to fit him. :(

[albion1919]

Thanks! :D

*wiggles* He might have...

I love linking him to wolves, it just clicks for me. She's certainly mentally unstable at that point.

He is a sensative person, deeply so I think. He works his magic on everyone ;)

Broke: well...

[fifmeister]

Dude, that was seriously creepy! I had chills reading the ending. She obviously seemed pretty brainwashed--I wonder how he did it?

[albion1919]

Muahahaha!! Depends on how long she's been there...

She might not even be in the room :x

[define_serenity]

Oooh how deliciously ambiguous. I can't make up my mind whether not Gabriel is real or Sarah or both of them! But that's just the cool thing about this.

Great work honey ;)

[albion1919]

Ohh I like that, which one is crazy or not...

Thank you! :)

[albion1919]

Thanks! *nods* She probably was, yup.

I know! Now I've got that in my head, damn... ;)