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Nov 24, 2007 18:10

Title: Trick or Treat? Chapter 19.

Characters: Eden/Gabriel.

Rating: R.

Word count: 1,904.

Disclaimer: Do not own.

Summery: They make a deal of convenience together.

Note: Very, very AU. The Carnival.

Overall WC: 41,493.

Parts: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 1314, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20

Sanctuary )

fic: trick or treat?, gabden, nanowrimo, heroes

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sinemoras09 November 24 2007, 18:40:58 UTC
They buried her on top of a hill, next to an oak tree and a cloudless sky.

Oh wow, I love that image. Gorgeous!

I love how slimy Bennet is--"it's not putting your powers on display, it's for the good of mankind!" Blech.

Uh oh, Gabriel wants the carnival! Braaains! lol XD

smut Y/Y? XD

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albion1919 November 24 2007, 18:48:29 UTC
Thank you!! :D

Slimy he might be but he's got a soft chewy centre! Er... XD

Prego stuff next, so I might.

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dana_serenity November 24 2007, 18:41:23 UTC
Aw, she's going to stay because he is all she needs, so beautiful xD

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albion1919 November 24 2007, 18:49:19 UTC
Soppy,innit? ^_^

XD

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dana_serenity November 24 2007, 18:51:09 UTC
We all need the soppy every now and then =P it keeps us sane xD

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fifmeister November 24 2007, 19:08:42 UTC
Awwww, Charlie. *clings to her sadly* I loved the part about her and Hiro. So sweet!

Loved seeing Bennet! You've got his characterization down perfectly. :D

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albion1919 November 24 2007, 19:15:13 UTC
I really liked Charlie. She was sugary and nice without being saccharine.

I have? YAY! Thank you! :D

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fifmeister November 24 2007, 19:33:17 UTC
Dumb question time...Charlie died because of her blood clot, right? At first when I read it, I was like "Wait, she's dead for no reason?" But then I remembered the blood clot. I just want to make sure I'm not totally off-base, here. :p

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albion1919 November 24 2007, 19:35:00 UTC
Nope Sylar got her. In one of the GNs it shows him with her power and in the finale you see her death in his eye.

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razycrandomgirl November 25 2007, 20:41:31 UTC
They buried her on top of a hill, next to an oak tree and a cloudless sky.

:( Poor Charlie. She never got to see Hiro again. :(

She had slumped against a back and was pulled into a warm hug. A man’s soothing, deep calm voice whispered to her that everything would be ok, she’s home now. That was her first introduction to Noah Bennet, the ring leader.

I love Noah ... :X

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albion1919 November 25 2007, 20:49:03 UTC
I know, I'm evol. I heard that they're going to release a novel about Charlie. I hope they do one for Eden next!

Noah is the best! "Did you pack Mr Muggles doggie bath?" XD XD

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razycrandomgirl November 25 2007, 20:54:41 UTC
Noah is the best! "Did you pack Mr Muggles doggie bath?" XD XD

That man is fucking awesome. First I'm seeing him as a dad. And then when he's talking to his wire like that .... Phew! :D

that shit is hot for some reason. *fans self*

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albion1919 November 25 2007, 20:59:39 UTC
Ann ships Noah/Sandra but she hasn't written anything yet. They're definitely one of the best couples on the show. She's so kooky which goes well with his stoic nature!

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