Under a Bad Sign 3

[albion1919]

Title: Under a Bad Sign 3
Characters/Pairing: Sylar/Maya
Rating: PG
Word count: 2,978
Disclaimer: Do not own.
Summery: Rescued from Odessa Maya has to make a hard choice.
Note: KW Verse. Takes place after Let Go. Maya visits Gabriel in Level 5.
Parts: 1, 2, 3, 4

Comments

[mortalshuffle]

This is what I love about your writing. All that emotion, all that anticipation has been built up throughout the course of this universe, and Maya and Gabriel (I can't keep calling him Sylar, now can I?) have come through to the other side. They've both grown immeasurably as people and as parents. They're a team now, even if they're going to be separated across time and distance. What else can they be after they've both killed each other? They're even now

[albion1919]

Thank you so much! I think it would be silly for them not to change and develop, to be stagnant after what had happened to them would be impossible. So yes I think Gabriel is right because I think after awhile he begins to think of himself as that (to me after his child is born.) Of course there will be relapses but I hope it’s understandable why.

Glasses: vanity is a good word, there was part of him, though changed, still sneered at what “Gabriel Gray” was to him, the nobody etc. Now I think he’s got more pressing matters at hand to think on.

Nadia: you’re a mind reader lol! I think that’s true for a lot of children, I can certainly relate.

Hee I have to leave it like that! She says she doesn’t love him and I don’t think she could bring herself to, understandably, but they are different people to who they were eight years ago. Who knows who they’ll be in relation to each other I another eight years…

Thank you again! :D

[mortalshuffle]

See, you get kids. Most people make them cutesy or innocent to the point where they'd have to be missing parts of their brain to be so unobservant of the world around them or brats from hell. You understand child psychology. Most people seem to forget what it's like to be a child once they become adults.

[albion1919]

I think people can do that because that time in your life is meant to be innocent, a certain blissful ignorance where you should only worry about homework etc, that adults shield children from. That’s in an ideal world. Sometimes it doesn't work but like you said it can work in the other direction, the child shielding the parent.

[bellonablack]

I liked this one, and now I feel...nervous.

LOL. but in a good way. :-) Nice writing and I felt sorry for Nadia. I always do you know, but there you go. :-)

[albion1919]

Aww don't feel nervous!

Thank you! Yeah I feel bad for to but I think it was unavoidable :(

[onimosity]

Oh sooo good and seriously? Waaay better than the season premiere last night.

[razycrandomgirl]

THIS!

[albion1919]

*blush* THANK YOU! (lol I didn't even watch it :x)

[razycrandomgirl]

When did he say the *bad sign* line?

Yes this is ... :D very very very exciting. They had a talk and there was tension, but is seems shifted. More tired and calm and I like that they've buried the hatchet so to speak.

I also liked the call backs to previous stories (though you can see I might have forgotten a few).

Now we see Peter?! :D

[albion1919]

You haven't yet ;)

Thank you! That's what I was aiming for, they're both tired and sad and it's more important then their past. I think Maya would still harbour that disappointment and anger at what he did but now she doesn't demonise him. And he's secure enough now not to seek her approval, just as everything's been taken from him.

I like to get bits in there.

I think so!

[razycrandomgirl]

Can't wait!

huh. I like him moving on a bit and growing. It's like a fasting ... cleansing.

:D

[albion1919]

:) :)

Not so much a cleansing when he didn't really make that choice to be torn from his family. He has grown but I found it sad to write, but that's just me.

[eternal_moonie]

WOOHOO!!!! TOTALLY LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!

[albion1919]

LOL thanks! I'll try to get started on the last part soon (well I think it's the last...)