Under a Bad Sign 2

Sep 19, 2009 21:51

Title: Under a Bad Sign 2
Characters/Pairing: Nadia, Maya.
Rating: PG
Word count: 2,000
Disclaimer: Do not own.
Summery: Rescued from Odessa Maya has to make a hard choice.
Note: KW Verse. Takes place after Let Go. Nadia sees things more clearly.
Parts: 1, 2, 3

Poor kid, can you imagine having that psycho for a dad? )

fic: under a bad sign, kept woman 'verse, saya, maya, heroes

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razycrandomgirl September 20 2009, 17:17:52 UTC
tectonic plate shifting

Shout outs! \o/

In tense ... What an image with the blood. Can't wait to read the next chapter. :D

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albion1919 September 20 2009, 17:25:00 UTC
Shout outs?

Thank you, I'm writing it now.

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razycrandomgirl September 20 2009, 17:29:30 UTC
Sorry I just remember Herrick saying that on the show.

YAY! *happy dance*

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albion1919 September 20 2009, 17:32:43 UTC
Oh I don't remember it.

I hope you'll like it, I've been wanting to get to this part for awhile lol

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gimmemypickle September 21 2009, 07:48:14 UTC
I am speechless! (Speechless in a good way, of course!)

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albion1919 September 21 2009, 10:21:56 UTC
lol you are? Thanks!

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mortalshuffle September 21 2009, 16:55:07 UTC
Wow. That's a lot to take in. I feel like I ran smack into a brick wall here. I was expecting you to do the Maya and Sylar confrontation in this chapter, but instead I got an emotional sucker-punch via a Nadia chapter. Poor kid ( ... )

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albion1919 September 22 2009, 14:56:36 UTC
*squishes your analytical, attention to detail self* :D

Oh I was saving the Maya/Sylar thing for later.

The blood? A bit of both really. I wanted it to be shady. The former government is no more but there does seem to be a structure in place, whether it’s legal is another matter. I like the idea that the Company was so latently infested in the different branches of the government that at heart maybe there wasn’t a difference.

She does have it hard now and not having straight answers, which she’s never had, would dig away at anyone. As she grows up she’s obviously more aware of it. Before she was in a bubble but now that it’s been burst those thoughts of blame will start to become apparent.

lol it makes me so happy that you want to do that! Next part should be up tonight! (I’m in the UK so I have to wait till the next day to watch it. But I’m not going to this season. Maybe my curiosity will get the better of me but for now, nope. I‘m happy with fic)

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mortalshuffle September 22 2009, 23:23:43 UTC
Heh, you know me. Why give a comment when an insanely detailed analysis will do? University, thy mark is upon me.

The Company no longer has any need to hide behind paper companies and whatnot, now that the world has effectively ended. No need for secrets to be kept if there's no one to protect from the truth, which might explain the blood testing. Hm...

Also: *does a little dance and sings* I'm gonna get me some Maya and Sylar interation, woot woot!

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albion1919 September 24 2009, 09:44:51 UTC
lol thought so! What did you study? I think Uni took all the analysis out of me :P

Exactly, abilities are no longer a secret so there's no need for them to stay hidden.

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eternal_moonie September 26 2009, 18:56:16 UTC
totally awesome story!!!! Totally love it!

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albion1919 September 26 2009, 19:10:38 UTC
Thank you!! :) :)

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