Under a Bad Sign

Sep 13, 2009 18:20

Title: Under a Bad Sign
Characters/Pairing: Maya, Howard Lemay
Rating: PG
Word count: 1,207
Disclaimer: Do not own.
Summery: Rescued from Odessa Maya has to make a hard choice.
Note: KW Verse. Takes place after Let Go. Yes, finally continuing.
Parts: 1, 2, 3

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fic: under a bad sign, kept woman 'verse, saya, maya, heroes

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eternal_moonie September 13 2009, 17:50:45 UTC
tammy, this was totally awesome! Thanks so much for posting!

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albion1919 September 13 2009, 17:56:03 UTC
You're welcome, glad you like it! Only took me over a year to start the sequel :P :P

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albion1919 September 14 2009, 06:55:07 UTC
Oh I'd always had something like this in mind but was a bit scared about carrying on lol. And writers block hindering me. So I just liked going back and filling in the gaps of the story. Thank you so much for reviewing!

She never annoyed me but the writers sure did. She had so much potential and room to be explored/developed. So happy you like her, there isn't enough people like you!

(in this? count on it. The show? I wish!)

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razycrandomgirl September 13 2009, 22:18:57 UTC
Look who's working miracles.

Can't wait till we get to the bits with Peter! \o/

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albion1919 September 14 2009, 06:57:17 UTC
:D

You may have to wait awhile for Peter to show up. If I can do it there should be three more chaps to come.

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mortalshuffle September 15 2009, 22:25:14 UTC
*Flail* You continued post-Let Go! Woot! I've been wondering what would happen to them after they left. Now onto the commentary:

Interesting reaction from Maya regarding Sylar's resurrection. What does that mean for our favorite dysfunctional couple? I have no clue what Maya's going to do next. Safety versus freedom? There's got to be a third option. Looking back, maybe things weren't so bad back in Texas with Sylar keeping everyone isolated from the world. I can't believe I just typed that.

...Is it wrong that I kind of want Maya to grab Nadia and bust Sylar out of where he's being kept? He's strong enough to keep them safe and together. I wonder if the thought will cross her mind.

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albion1919 September 16 2009, 10:30:58 UTC
I took the plunge!

Heehee, what does it mean? Either way I think Maya’s going to have some very confused feelings about what she did and reactions to him afterwards. Not just the fact they were safe but the fact they were keeping Nadia isolated from their pasts.

Hmmm, we’ll see ;)

(have to say thank you for your reviews, they’re always so thorough and it gives me the push to keep writing. Thank you)

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mortalshuffle September 16 2009, 15:38:11 UTC
(You're making me blush over here. Truth be told, it's a combination of the stories themselves and the fact that you're willing to respond to your readers that makes me want to give such in-depth comments. Consensus: We're both awesome.)

I've been thinking about their pasts in relation to Nadia and the ultimatum of doom. I'm terrified that Maya is going to have to tell her daughter about what she did. How old is she now? Seven? Ten? I don't want Nadia to find out at all, but it would be worse for her to find out from someone else rather than her own parents. Is Maya going to talk to Sylar about it? I keep thinking of that hidden painting in Let Go...

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albion1919 September 16 2009, 20:11:13 UTC
lol, I blush so easy. I always try to respond because it is nice when someone takes the trouble to review at all, let alone leave a long review. Yus, awesomesauce :P

I think it would be almost impossible for her to say it because of that reason. Nadia’s aware that things have never been right so I think as she gets older it will get more obvious, but still ambiguous. Maybe become a case of not wanting to know.

Nadia’s almost 8 at this point. Maya will be seeing him again and the painting is a hint, yup.

I’ll try have the next part up by Friday.

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onimosity September 17 2009, 04:25:37 UTC
Yay! So happy this is continuing!

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albion1919 September 17 2009, 10:10:34 UTC
Thank you! I know you wanted smut but damn it's like squeezing blood from a rock in this verse :P

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