T H O U G H T S O N ( A B E A U T I F U L D I S A S T E R )
All the previous chapters of now A Beautiful Disaster are posted here! After rereading my previous chapters, I think I understand why I took it down. There were many, many things were made me cringe and other things that made me twitch. The characters' dialogues! I know I haven't been in the Gundam Seed fandom in a while, but I know enough to be able to say, "Cagalli wouldn't say these things! Athrun would not act like this! What was I thinking!?" And there were indefinite unnecessary subplots that I don't remember planning in my head. There were so many parts based off on other stories that I read, it was terrible! Like what happened to originality!? Umm, so I don't know where I'm going to go with the new A Beautiful Disaster, but it will definitely NOT follow the path of the old one. Yeah? Yeah.