My Former Lovers and Her Daughter Chapter 5 Part 1

Apr 07, 2010 12:01


Title: My Former Lovers and Her Daughter ~ Chapter 5~
Author: Ha-chan and her recent craziness (akinoyama)
Rating: PG-15
Genre: Family Life, Romance, bit angst later…
Warning: AU, Hikaru’s girl, Unbeta-ed, Terrible English
Pairings: Yabu x Hikaru, Yabu x OC
Disclaimer: The plot
Synopsis: Yabu and Hikaru met after long years. And each other’s past ( Read more... )

fiction writing, multi-chapter, my friend, fic: my former lovers & her daughter, perfect couple koutahikaru

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blozzom_zone April 7 2010, 04:51:35 UTC
claim first spot xPPP

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blozzom_zone April 7 2010, 04:59:34 UTC
♥♥♥♥

thank you so much Ha-chan, you know what?? I've just been felt sick about that ....Bu duet thingy during the spring con(I even rejected to say his name-.-""" because for God's sake he really annoys me)but this chapter has TOTALLY make me feel A LOT BETTER ♥ thanks a lot Ha-chan!!!*huggles you tight* can't wait for the next chap yo!! can I ask for the MS file first??8DD lol

and this:

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blozzom_zone April 7 2010, 05:00:45 UTC
“If you feel embarrassed just hide your face on my chest.” Yabu playfully teased and walked out from the infirmary, heading to where the taxi was waiting.

Hikaru pouted but did accordingly. She could feel how fast Yabu’s heart beat, just as same as hers. She slowly looked up and stunned with him all over again.

*dies of too much love*

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akinoyama April 10 2010, 02:36:08 UTC
Don't die... yo!
You can't read the next if you dies...

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kawaiimaix3 April 7 2010, 05:05:22 UTC
Lol ur comments make me laugh :) Saa-chan

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kawaiimaix3 April 7 2010, 05:04:30 UTC
LOLZ I was laughing through most XD

I wanna kill the person who did that to Hika-Chan !!!!!!!!!!

I bet Yabu's ex- did that to her ! DX grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

Love this a lot !! Keep it coming !!

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akinoyama April 10 2010, 02:42:38 UTC
Hey... what're you laughing at Mai-chan???

Ja... go kil the person then... I support you... LOL...

Hmm... You'l know about it on the chapter 6... XDDD... And it'll be so late since my laptop get repaired now... and I don't know till when.... :(

Love you too... for always reading and commenting....

Ganbarimasu!!!!

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akinoyama April 14 2010, 02:43:23 UTC
Yeah... okaa-chan cries... blame otou-chan!!!
Ah thank ou for saying so...
It's okay now... It's been fixed.... XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD =) =) =)

Not to forget... thank you for reading and commenting...

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YAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW keisuke_chan182 April 12 2010, 15:33:43 UTC
finally !! wekekekekekeke xD
bridal carry !! love it love it love it !!xD

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Re: YAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW akinoyama April 14 2010, 02:46:20 UTC
YEEEEEEEEEAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY........ YabuHika MOMENT.....
They're romantic da yo ne........

Thank you for reading and commenting.....

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Re: YAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW keisuke_chan182 April 14 2010, 14:16:29 UTC
yeap yabuhikka moment !!!!!!!!!!!
wowowowowowowo ~~
i love hara-chan ^^

welcome yo !!

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