Beautiful Lie [to Believe in] | 02/?? | AoixRuki, UruhaxRuki

[akichuu]

Title: Beautiful Lie [to Believe in]
Chapter: 2/??
Author: akichuu
Fandom: the GazettE
Pairing: AoixRuki, RukixAoi, UruhaxRuki, possibly more to come
Theme: 017: Filth in the Beauty - the GazettE @ 50stories
Rating: R, NC-17
Genre: AU (highschool), angst, smut
Warning: Yaoi, (slight) pedophilia, incestuous relationship, domestic abuse, possible violence. Not

Comments

[mayakashii]

oh man i was waiting for this update eagerly <3
thinking back about it the first chapter really had me captured 8D
i think i just love ruki pov and centred fics too much, and because its you it will be promising 8D

ahh, ive got chills all over LOL
you made the whole scene seem really natural and believable
and i like that they dont just have sex but kind of need each other even though taka half regrets it
it smells like angst though xDD from every side lol

ahh wonderful <333
thanks a lot :3

[akichuu]

Well thank you! XD
Of course it will be angst, didn't I mention that on the header? *Laughs*
True, true, it was also easier to convey what Ruki felt with the 1st pov. His feelings, his thoughts. Also the plot seems to flow quite easily, compared to if I had written it in 3rd pov.
Oh, you're very welcome! I hope you'll stick around then, and wish me luck with the next chapter ^^

[mayakashii]

lol you did mention it but angst kinda scares me but i guess for the sake of this lovely plot im gonna cope with it xDD
ahh~ i read it again, please update soon *0* im all giddy fangirly here LOL /fail

but yes of course, im gonna stick till the very end!
good luck :3
<3!

[watkins269]

i've read most of your fics and i love all of them. i would be willing to beta if you want me to. do you have any specific requirements that i need to meet in order to qualify as a beta?

[akichuu]

Requirements, well aside from the technical qualities, I guess I'm going to need someone who is patient enough to deal with me because I am going to ask questions. Basically I need someone I get into a discussion with. Maybe not a teacher, but a tutor.
I will have to talk to izumi_luvsjrock first though; she's kinda had agreed to be my beta but we haven't gotten a chance to talk...

[izumi_luvsjrock]

*rolls around* oh wow I'll comment in a sec just saving spot...

AND I TRIED ADDING YOUR MSN BUT YOU DIDN'T give me the last bit like if it was @hotmail.com or someting so..it failed *headdesk* try adding me first then XD?

nyappychan_izumi(at)hotmail(dot)com

*goes to read*

[izumi_luvsjrock]

o.m.g...hmm I hate to say it but I still love this story as wrong as it is hah...

deathly curious about what's gonna happen as well as the whole family situation *nods*(I'm still willing to be your beta if you want though)

[akichuu]

WAAAAH!! I'm so sorry! Totally forgot about that XD it's hotmail dot com...
I'm still interested, of course, so if you have checked on the first chapter then just send it to me, and then we'll talk more :D
Oh this is going to be a complicated plot so I hope you have enough patience XD
I'm currently working on the third chapter, hopefully it'll be up soon...

[izumi_luvsjrock]

haha ohh~ I like a challenge HAHA mk lemme go add you on msn ^^

[n3uromanc3r]

After reading this chapter, and knowing how far this thing between the two of them went I wonder how it started. I'm so curious how they got this close.

There are those mysterious hints about Ruki's parents and their not existing family life which made me really curious. I wonder what's behind those memories. I think it's easier to understand why Ruki needs Yuu and this relationship, but what drives Yuu towards the boy despite they are relatives, despite Ruki is minor and his own student?
As I read the previous chapter I felt like the reason why Ruki doesn't do his home work is to get detention, to have a chance to be alone with Yuu, but it seems he isn't the only one that takes advantage of those missing home works.

Anyway do they meet outside of school as well - their case is special, Yuu is his uncle, nobody can have any objection if they would be seen in their free time together - although I guess nobody knows about their close relation at school...

I can't wait for the next chapter, it's really fascinating!

[akichuu]

Woah! Long review! <33

Okay... Uhh...
I'm so curious how they got this close.
The answer to that will be revealed as the story goes, of course ^^;

but what drives Yuu towards the boy despite they are relatives, despite Ruki is minor and his own student?
Hmm... it's a rather complicated relationship that they had (I'd say it's only physical but then there's some kind of a mental necessity that Taka also needs to fulfill).

nobody can have any objection if they would be seen in their free time together
No, nobody can, but as long as they don't see Taka and Yuu involved in a sexual situation XD Well, you know what I mean...

Thank you! (oooh~ cute heart~)
I'm working on it! ^^

[pinky_heaven19]

Hello o/

Wow, I started reading this really late, huh? Pleade don't get me wrong, but sometimes I wait for the fic to be closer to the end to start reading it so I can be sure the author will finish it for sure!

Ah, I love it so much! The "incestuous relationship" really caught my attention! XP
Ruki seems like a really troubled boy, and with reason! At first I was thinking of him as a rebel-wanna-be, but he really has his problems =\

I'm off to read some more while I have the time! o/