Fic Rec : Harry Potter - Chapters-Length Mpreg!Harry :: COMPLETE FIC ::

Apr 16, 2010 11:00

Here are the second HP fic rec.

Still in the mood of good mpreg, but this time I gonna list a more than one chapters stories.
No need to fret. All the fics which list bellow were already COMPLETE, because I hate discontinuous fics like the next person.
And remember, there were no creature fic in the list bellow 'cause I plan to make another rec for those category someday.


Score :

### = recommended
##   = good reading
#     = read only if you have nothing to do

A Moment in Time by The Shadow Bandit  |  Rating : M  |  Chapters : 35  |  Score : ###
Summary : COMPLETE: AU: Harry learns during his seventh year that his life can change forever in a single moment in time. SLASH and MPREG HarryDraco.

My Comment : You may have been seeing this fic in another recs before. That's right because this fic is that good. This was a quite old fic which first published on August 2003 and I have red it at the beginning of my mpreg obsession. But until now I still remember some touchy scenes in it. The story was started with the ordinary Harry-went-to-Azkaban plot but then the plot spread to be more complicated. I like how Harry and Draco's relationship, the first time and the second time, moved in a quite sedate pace. There were no sense of jump-head-long-to-the-bed-at-the-first-chance with this couple or the tears-jerking-dramatic-angst in it. Both Harry and Draco were so mature in here. They used logic first, and not just following their hormones. And their interactions with their children were so realistic in a very loving way. And the children characterization were just as believable in a very cute way. The author also make the pairing interactions with the other characters very real, we wouldn't feel that they were only there just to make the pairing not look too lonely. The other characters background were wrote in a way that the author had though about it thoughtfully, no sense of they were only making excuse for what they have done. In this fic there was also a female OC but trust me, she was not a marry sue. But with all those greatness, there were some things which make me wrinkle my brows. Like how Draco's reason to leaved Harry was just not make sense because in my opinion there were many solutions for their problems. Also about how omnipotent Harry was. It was oke if he is an animagus, but to have several animagis not to mention a rare one? Please... For the avid bottom!Harry lovers please be noted that in chapter 20 there was a sex scene with Harry as a top, but don't worry 'cause it was not even that graphic, just one paragraph which could be rate with PG-13.

Malfoy Redemption by dpiloff  |  Rating : R  |  Chapters : 18  | Score : #
Summary : DM is released from a dark spell changing his entire personality. Who is the new Malfoy and why are Americans entering the war. Warning NC-17 for graphic slash, mpreg, OCC, OC, AU. If you are offended please do not read.

My Comment : This was the only chapters-length Drarry fiction from dpoillof, yet. Compared with another fics in this rec, this story was quite plain. The plot was already done many times, the pace was also seems too fast. Harry was sweet, innocent, and beautiful, while Draco's like a rich gorgeous, gentle, and perfect prince. What I like in this story is the easy-to-digest story-line. It was so light and sweet without making it too saccharine or unclass. The influence of American wizarding world in this fic was the factor which make me gave this story the lowest score. I don't mean to sound bigotry, but from the way the author wrote it seems that America have a better and more organize ministry than the other. I believed than even the foulest government have their own pride in trying to solved their problems by their own. There was also the factor of to many OCs which have very important roles in it, for me it feel like the canon characters were just accessories for the sake keeping the story in HP universe. But like I said before, this story is very sweet. If you like this kind of story, maybe you need to check the authors collections because all her stories gave you the same vibe and nearly the same plot as this one. Just be warned that other than a oneshot, the others Drarry are still WIP.

Maybe Baby by Frances Potter  | Rating : R  |  Chapters : 9  |  Score  : ###
Summary : Harry is pregnant.

My Comment : When you red the summary, I bet your though is : "Duh!". I agree ^ ^. But maybe that was what the author intention *snicker*. But don't judge the story by it's brief and obvious summary. Because I gave it a full score with reasons. The reasons were about how the author wrote some very emotional scenes without the need of angst in it, but the readers were still captivated by the clever choice of words. Also about how emotionally frail Harry was without making him looks like an overtly-clingy-prone-to-tears-needy girl, even in his hormonal period of pregnancy. Another good quality was how we could feel Draco's endless love for Harry without him need to expressed it in many words but just by some stubble actions. The conclusion was, Frances Potter didn't make her fic to wordy but still enticing and deeply move. That's to be expected from the creator of the infamous Resolution Arc, another highly recommended fic from Frances but non mpreg and seems to be in a very long hiatus.

Sperm Cow by empathic_siren  |  Rating : R/NC-17-ish (author's own word)  | Chapters : 2  |  Score : ##
Summary : Draco needed an heir and he set his sights on Harry's sperm. Harry just wanted a family. Well, and maybe Draco, too. Toss in a few life debts, a few obscure parental rights laws, and two clueless men who think they have it all figured out, and you have one heck of farce.

My Comment : The title was the reason I read this fic. I was hoping to find a good mpreg fic with a touch of humor. But unfortunately, the burlesque factor was just so little to the point of none existence. But still, the concept of male pregnancy in this story was quite original and the end result also very sweet. Except of the mpreg factor, this story feelss like some stereotype yaoi manga story line. Especially the third-person factor, so cliche but sweet nonetheless.

Picking Wildflowers by Slashy Snitch  |  Rating : M  |  Chapters : 18  |  Score : #
Summary : COMPLETE Harry starts dating Ginny, but she isn't what he's looking for. Harry and Draco get together, but what if Harry might have to be with Ginny? Can Draco keep Harry? Sub!Harry, Slut!Ginny. Anal, HJ, Lemon, MPreg, Preg, Slash, SoloM, Toys, Het. Implied NC.

My Comment : Another story which I believed had been record in many recs. Maybe because the story was so full of Ginny!bashing which make it being rec numerous time. I wouldn't know, but I have my own reasoning. I'm not a fans of Harry/Ginny or het in general, but I don't hate Ginny to the point like to bashing her. But if a story have Ginny became an overbearing bitch and like to torment Harry's or Draco live, I wouldn't mind to read the Ginny!bashing part of it. But this story was so far from that. I couldn't stand het fic especially one which have many het sex in it, and this story have those in spade, which make me not too enjoying this story from the first page. Another aspect is, it was Harry who suggest the sex with Ginny and he also the one who act like the ungentlemanly unfeeling teenage boy about it. If later on Ginny became an incorrigible slut it was Harry's own fault, because it need two to tango. Another unsettling factor were how well liked, overly powerful and perfect Harry was, multiple patronus? please... and how Draco was too awed by Harry's seemingly flawlessness. The sudden transformation of Harry from being a unbeatable-confident hero to a skittish-meek damsel also leaving some lingering bad taste in my mouth. It was too forced for my taste. The reason why I put this fic in my rec was because I like the notion of Harry ditching Ginny for Draco, without care of the reasons why. Beside, the smexes between Harry and Draco were too hot to be missed. ;)

The Bet by DelilaGrace | Rating : M   |  Chapters : 26 (with two sequels, one finished and one WIP)  |  Score  : ##
Summary : The bet was simple. Get Harry Potter to sleep with him and Draco would get Blaise's coveted Porsche Boxster in return. It was simple. Too bad Harry was celibate.

My Comment : Another sweet-innocent-and-androgynous Harry fic which is one of my weakness. This story was full of stereotypes. About the relationship between an absolutely perfect bad-ass and filthy rich playboy with an homey pretty sweet little bishonen. I don't really like the concept of Harry being adore and love by every males who laid their pervy eyes on him nor how easily and quickly Harry slept with his lovers once he trust them, without care of his natural condition *hinthint*. He was not a slut, but to be accidentally pregnant in a quite young age without partner at his side twice seems really careless to me. Other than Harry's prettiness, the dominating-possessive-and overly-jealous Draco were the one who make me gave this story and average score. I could never say no those kind of seme *hinthint*. If you like this story, maybe you need to read the sequels, Redemption and Salvation. Just note that the last one haven't been updated for six months.

The Path to Parenthood by Loui  |  Rating : NC-17  | Chapters : 34  | Score : ###
Summary : The fic centres on a long-term relationship between Draco and Harry. It is post-Hogwarts, post-War and features minor het and slash pairings as well, not to mention the death of a minor character in a later chapter. The fic encompasses a relationship for Harry and Draco that lasts decades and is most decidedly, happily ever after. (The story was written and completed before HBP was published).

My Comment : Not much summary there but still... I like this author because she could wrote a really in-character bottom!Harry which not overtly clingy, weepy, meek, and girl-like. Loui wrote her stories flawlessly with a lot of heart-warming dialogs and lines but not too lovely-dovey. The sex scenes were not the focus of the story and only appear on between chapters of just in a couple of lines. But when she wrote it, it's really hot but not vulgar and don't forget the palpitating dialogs or sentences in it. At first, this fic could be category in versatile (the pairing didn't have any rule who is top or bottom) but on the later chapters it chance with reasonable explanations. This fic was happen during a very long duration of time in Draco and Harry's live *sorry I forget how long it's ^ ^* and tend to jump far forward. But the thorough and easy to digest explanations would not leave us wondering about what and what. happen during those times. The plus point in this story was how Harry's friends were supporting his relationship with Draco without the unnecessary mother-hening-smothering cliches. Unfortunately, on 1st April 2010, Loui had deleted all her stories in the internet *hence the none link to this story*. But no need worry, I have safe all her stories in my hard disk. Just contact me if you like to read it.

The Things We Do For Freedom by gemlou137  |  Rating : M  | Chapter : 17 (including prologue)  |  Score  :  ###
Summary : In order to get Harry out of prison and hidden away Draco needs to get married. YaoiSlash, mpreg, wandless magic. Read warnings etc on chapters!

My Comment : Another fic which started with Harry-being-wrongly-accused-of-murders-and-sent-to-Azkaban plot. But to make it interest was that Harry didn't have a love nor friend relationship with Draco prior his Azkaban time like other fic with similar plot. The pace of their relationships chanced from animosity to married-couple, albeit in contract marriage, were seems a bit rush. But it was really apt with the title which mean both Harry and Draco will do anything for freedom. From there, the plot move in a normal pace even seems to be dragging itself. But those were amenable, because we could be more understanding of Harry ever growing love for Draco. The other plus point was how the author make Harry powerful without the sense of bragging out or over the top. This fic were full of angst. From how Harry must suppressed his feeling for Draco to maintained his freedom to how cold Draco's attitudes were about the issue of his husband, Harry, their marriage, and their children. And I pitied Draco the most because unintentionally he had missed many beautiful moments with his family because he choose his freedom above all, but fortunately in the end he come along. Another un-similarity of this fic with the others was the story good moral about how you don't need to take violent revenge to all who had done you wrong, because at the end all of that mean nothing as long as there was love. Please be warned that very end of the last the chapter implied of bottom!Draco and mpeg!Draco.

To Create A Life by ravenpan  | Rating : PG  |  Chapter : 2  |  Score  :  ###
Summary : Harry’s never been good about listening when someone tells him ‘no’.

My Comment : Harry was so mull-head and single-mind in here, and I love it. I like how the author combine the seriousness of the situations with coltish dialogs. The proportions was so perfect and seamless. This fic was so full of Draco and Harry's wit banters from the start until the end, and that was really amusing to the point of crack. It just remain us of their endless argumentation throughout their school year, with Harry's oblivious and smart-mouth retorts and Draco's snide and cynical barbs. Not only that, Harry's interactions with another characters were also very entertaining. I especially like the scene between Harry and the Kashmir mojo, really amusing with some dash of dry sarcasms. But even with all their continuous quarrels, we could see that both Draco and Harry were very deeply in love with each other.

That was for now.
When the memory come back to me, I would tried to re-new this rec.

Next plan, Veela!Fic rec... X3

status : complete, kink : mpreg, fandom : harry potter, pairing : draco/harry, length : chapters, rec : fiction

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