Who wants to proofread and maybe fill some blanks?
I finished the first chapter of a story that comes from This Post
And I need validation that I'm not a total nutter someone to read through the part I've written and tell me if I should expand some bits or keep them short. And oh my goodness, I can't be bothered to care enough to name things like super awesome 23rd century brooms, or creatures, or joke boxes, or hexes/charms--but if anyone out there likes that sort of thing I'm all for suggestions.
Also, there are a few spots where I'm missing a small thought that would complete a sentence.
And if anyone wants to make Scotty's speech sound more well scottish lemme know.
Will send via e-mail, cuz, i'm not quite ready for it to be up on the 'net.
---attempting to move on with Chapter 2 now---
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And I need validation that I'm not a total nutter someone to read through the part I've written and tell me if I should expand some bits or keep them short. And oh my goodness, I can't be bothered to care enough to name things like super awesome 23rd century brooms, or creatures, or joke boxes, or hexes/charms--but if anyone out there likes that sort of thing I'm all for suggestions.
Also, there are a few spots where I'm missing a small thought that would complete a sentence.
And if anyone wants to make Scotty's speech sound more well scottish lemme know.
Will send via e-mail, cuz, i'm not quite ready for it to be up on the 'net.
---attempting to move on with Chapter 2 now---
Also: Poll Quick Poll