I'm glad you also liked the archery scene. Part of me feels that it's a bit sudden (and Mary Sue-ish) to have Ka-hai show that she knows her way around a bow and arrow, but I want to write some family backstory for her to show how it became tradition in her family for girls to learn that kind of thing.
Of course, I have to finish this fic first, and I can't wait to get through the angsty scenes because I don't like my characters moping around (although you're right, it's necessary for the story). At least I already have a good part of Chapter 13 finished!
Wahhhhh 1st big argument for Moon couple... I wonder how Kahai reaction will be when she found out that Jaeshin's formerly red msgr @.@ andddd i hope they'll make up soon and lovey dovey as usual :p
Anyway, thanks for the new chapter...can wait to read moreeee XDDD *stalkstalk*
and monday it is! Actually,I was up until 1:30am in the morning,just surfing listlessly when I thought about going to your page to see if you have posted chapter 12
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I deliberately set up the argument such that both were right, but represent only parts of the whole truth. (It wouldn't be nice if one of them were totally wrong!) You're spot on about Ka-hai's viewpoint, while Jae-shin's is rooted in what I learned from the Apology (which I read while studying... not at La Salle :-p) - about the great horse of society needing a gadfly to sting it into life.
Regarding that other thing - I read that not all women have that, but she's definitely feeling rough in the mornings ;)
No worries - it was the first thing that came to my mind, too! However, I decided that she needs to have less obvious symptoms (at least for now, or maybe she's actively trying to suppress the reflex to barf) because "the other party involved" is not supposed to find out for a few more chapters ;)
Omo! omo! its the battle of beliefs... ^_^ both do have good points though hekhek i wonder, how will they be able to make up? hmmm...curious for the upcoming chapters. (will they ever capture the blue messenger? hihihi)
thank you ms akane for this new chappie! keep it up. =)
How will they be able to make up? Simple - love conquers all :-p (and the Blue Messenger will somehow be involved....)
I'm glad people are willing to give this thing a chance even though the main couple is currently on the outs! :) In a previous, non-SKK fic, I had the heroine dump the hero for another guy for a while and I think I lost quite a few readers as a result!
wondering how it can be resolved when they're both right? heheh! i mean, will ka hai change her opinion if or when she finds out that jae shin was once the red messenger?
*smiles mysteriously* You'll find out... once I actually write it, LOL.
Poor Jae-shin is going to put up with a lot during his wife's pregnancies :-p She will be weepy, and have cravings, and when the baby starts kicking she's going to sleep with her tummy against him so that when the baby kicks, he also gets disturbed :-p
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Jae Shin with a bruised ego is no fun but needed for the conflict.
I also liked the archery match and the hidden talent :)
Thanks for writing!
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I'm glad you also liked the archery scene. Part of me feels that it's a bit sudden (and Mary Sue-ish) to have Ka-hai show that she knows her way around a bow and arrow, but I want to write some family backstory for her to show how it became tradition in her family for girls to learn that kind of thing.
Of course, I have to finish this fic first, and I can't wait to get through the angsty scenes because I don't like my characters moping around (although you're right, it's necessary for the story). At least I already have a good part of Chapter 13 finished!
Have a good week!
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Anyway, thanks for the new chapter...can wait to read moreeee XDDD *stalkstalk*
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I want them to make up soon, too, LOL!
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I deliberately set up the argument such that both were right, but represent only parts of the whole truth. (It wouldn't be nice if one of them were totally wrong!) You're spot on about Ka-hai's viewpoint, while Jae-shin's is rooted in what I learned from the Apology (which I read while studying... not at La Salle :-p) - about the great horse of society needing a gadfly to sting it into life.
Regarding that other thing - I read that not all women have that, but she's definitely feeling rough in the mornings ;)
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both do have good points though hekhek
i wonder, how will they be able to make up?
hmmm...curious for the upcoming chapters.
(will they ever capture the blue messenger? hihihi)
thank you ms akane for this new chappie!
keep it up. =)
-robelyn
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I'm glad people are willing to give this thing a chance even though the main couple is currently on the outs! :) In a previous, non-SKK fic, I had the heroine dump the hero for another guy for a while and I think I lost quite a few readers as a result!
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wondering how it can be resolved when they're both right? heheh! i mean, will ka hai change her opinion if or when she finds out that jae shin was once the red messenger?
looking forward to the next chapter :)
expecting papa jae shin would be adorable!
thanks for sharing!
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Poor Jae-shin is going to put up with a lot during his wife's pregnancies :-p She will be weepy, and have cravings, and when the baby starts kicking she's going to sleep with her tummy against him so that when the baby kicks, he also gets disturbed :-p
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