Comments | akame_shinies: [fic] Heal Me - Fourteenth Cut ~The Dark and the Light~

prettyorianna in akame_shinies

[fic] Heal Me - Fourteenth Cut ~The Dark and the Light~

Sep 11, 2013 22:09

Title: Heal Me
Pairing: Jin x Kame
Rating: NC-17
Genre - Catch Me: AU, angst, romance, smut, drama, tragedy
Beta by: my cat. okay, seriously, nobody
Disclaimer: I don't own KAT-TUN, any of its members, any other JE people. I write this for fun and for other fans of these fine folks. But don't steal my plots, mmkay? I put a great deal of time ( Read more... )

warning: violent, pairing: akame, warning: character death, genre: angst, genre: smut, fic: cmlmfmhm, genre: au, pairing: ryokame, rating: nc-17, fic: completed, warning: graphic, fic: multichapter, genre: drama, genre: tragedy, warning: rape / non-con, genre: romance

Comments 8

ext_458754 September 12 2013, 13:22:38 UTC

yeah it does
love the poem
and yeah its a step up =)

prettyorianna September 14 2013, 05:08:25 UTC

Took a few years to write that poem. But I'm happy with it.

Maybe Kame will be able to turn his life around again.

peteyjared September 12 2013, 13:42:50 UTC

the poem is so deep. It must have been something really important to you. and it took you sweat and blood to finish it. I should say, I could connect to it to. well written, Orianna-san. ^^

Well, this cut really pierce my heart. I could totally feel how Kame was lost and suddenly woke up from getting lost.

well, I should say that Jin is making decision too fast. He should have stayed.

prettyorianna September 14 2013, 05:16:32 UTC

Took years to finish that poem because there was just... it had to flow, you know? Can't force it. Sometimes I think all that crappy over-angsty teenage stuff I wrote when I was in highschool was to get all the crappy stuff out of the way so I could write this one and one other. And I haven't written any poetry since this one and the other one LOL.

Yeah, Jin's not really making wise choices right now.

Anyways, I got the next update posted. Sorry it wasn't up yesterday but between the dentist and getting the hubby from work, I was exhausted LOL.

peteyjared September 14 2013, 05:34:36 UTC

Sometimes being a teenager with all sort of problems are good ne? heh! You can get all the inspiration to write. Even I found old stuffs when I was in College and I used them again. lols! sometimes it's crappy, but sometimes, it really describe what I am feeling now. (something will never change, ehk?)

Orianna-san, I hope your teeth is okay. hurhur! Will read the next cut once I got back from work, ne. *sulks because who works on a Saturday. -.-*

prettyorianna September 14 2013, 06:14:49 UTC

Eh, my teeth are bad but that's because I didn't take care of them when I was younger and then I didn't go to the dentist for like ten years. Well, they're mostly all fixed now but I still need a root canal. Doesn't hurt though.

Work on a Saturday? Sorry to hear it. I have to go to the laundry mat on Saturday so I guess I'm working too LOL.

purikazu September 14 2013, 06:58:45 UTC

wuahh.. definately in love with the poemm!!!

yoshhaaaa.... kame's moving on!!

goo, turtle... goo....

*throws confetties*

prettyorianna September 14 2013, 07:12:44 UTC

Happy you like the poem (^_^)

Ooh, confetti? Maybe I should make a cake. I mean, it's not a party till you have both, right?

Don't mind me, I should have been in bed a couple hours ago so I"m a bit loopy.