Comments | akame_shinies: [fic] Lose Me - Twelfth Cut ~Destruction of the Grove~

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[fic] Lose Me - Twelfth Cut ~Destruction of the Grove~

Aug 17, 2013 23:27

Title: Lose Me
Pairing: Jin x Kame
Rating: NC-17
Genre - Catch Me: AU, angst, romance, smut, drama, tragedy
Beta by: my cat. okay, seriously, nobody
Disclaimer: I don't own KAT-TUN, any of its members, any other JE people. I write this for fun and for other fans of these fine folks. But don't steal my plots, mmkay? I put a great deal of time ( Read more... )

genre: smut, warning: violent, pairing: akame, fic: cmlmfmhm, pairing: ryokame, genre: au, pairing: jinda, fic: completed, rating: nc-17, warning: graphic, fic: multichapter, warning: character death, genre: drama, warning: rape / non-con, genre: angst

Comments 8

purikazu August 19 2013, 01:26:26 UTC

here, the peak of angst, i feel..
it'd be difficult for kame to recover from his condition now..

and i wonder, why did ryo so obsessive towards kame? why did he humiliate kame so much? have kame ever hurt ryo?

okay, okay, i wont ask anymore..
coz i will get the answer late, ne, ori-chan.. ^_^

yosh, do we arrive at the 3rd part? The "Find Me" right? ^_^//

prettyorianna August 19 2013, 02:14:47 UTC

I won't tell you why Ryo is so obsessive towards Kame because that'll come out in later cuts. But I can explain why he humiliates him so much ( ... )

peteyjared August 20 2013, 14:59:24 UTC

Sorry for reading this chapter late though I was so curious about the end of this arch. so much for being busy. T_T

it really breaks my heart when Ryo raped Kame at their special place. OF ALL PLACES?! WHY CAN'T HE JUST DRAGGED KAME SOMEWHERE ELSE AND RAPED HIM? pfft *end of shouting*

and what is Ueda? Son of a police or spy? hahaha! he got so many connection. and I wonder what's going through his mind when he watch the tape. xD

Well, I don't think that Kame will ever get together with Ryo. maybe Jin will just find him (obviously) and safe him again. Jin will obviously go through all the hardship to head Kame again.

off to the next arch now. thanks for this awesome story, though it really gets on my nerve to just push Ryo into a pool of piranha plus sharks. HAHAHA!

prettyorianna August 20 2013, 17:14:06 UTC

Well, in all fairness to Ryo's twisted point of view, that place is special to Kame and he realizes it must be because of Jin. Therefore that place represents a bond between Jin and Kame. That's why Ryo did it there. He's trying to break Kame's ties to anyone other than himself.

Though in all fairness to a normal point of view, Ryo's just messed up.

As for Ueda, you'll have to wait to find out.

Oh, are we adding sharks to the mix now? Wow. You guys all really hate Ryo. But that's okay because he's being completely horrid.

pinkynishi August 22 2013, 22:11:40 UTC

Fuck ryo.

Fuck him.

Grrrrr. Next!!

prettyorianna August 22 2013, 23:19:13 UTC

Poor Ryo. Everyone hates him. Well, it's his own damn fault 'cause he hurt Kame!

Still happy to be getting your comments (^_^) You're awesome pinkynishi!!

serial_translat January 22 2014, 09:22:52 UTC

Woah, it was the peak of that arc somehow. The dreadful side got worse again and again gradually.

Awful to read and imagine(=it was well written but you can guess it's difficult to say "good things" about such scenes, right ?)

Next arc now !! :)

prettyorianna January 22 2014, 22:43:48 UTC

I wish I could say it was the worst of it, but I'd be totally lying. Though I think if I was to rewrite this story, I'd make a few changes. There's not really a moral or a message, just more a series of events that happen to some people and how they get through it. But it was my first fic so I have a soft spot for it.

Anyways, thank you for commenting again (^_^) I absolutely love getting comments.