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Jul 17, 2008 00:38



Passive forbearance

His sleeves brought to my mind the image of a dehydrated plant. It also seemed to me that his face was coming out from the black uniform, in the curve that a flower does from its branch. His skin had been highlighted red, by the blood that surged the thin arteries close to the surface of his face. His hair was disheveled and ( Read more... )

gin/kira

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minorcases July 18 2008, 19:32:10 UTC
Wow, I really enjoyed this. Bruisy and painful and loooovely. By the way, is it okay if you explain to me what the main motif and, I suppose, underlying story this has? Because I can just about taste the story, but I can't quite understand because I am tired and cannot think. D: Once again, great work! This is one of my favourite representations of GinKira.

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akai_o July 18 2008, 20:24:43 UTC
Well, I didn't use a motif in this, but I am a lot repetitive and I think that comes out when I write without thinking. I think that what happens here is that he is having recurring experiences, but doesn't allow them to hold any gravity, so he is always on zero ground. I don't know why a person like him would be interested in a person like Kira. But it's my imression is tht Kira is very stable without trying and that's somethin Gin could envy.

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minorcases July 18 2008, 21:03:04 UTC
Ah, I see now! Thank you for answering! :D

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akai_o July 18 2008, 21:32:58 UTC
that's got to be the cutest omake ever...

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mangust July 18 2008, 21:25:01 UTC
Personnaly, I see Kira as a perfect "home" to where the wondering and restless being Gin can return anytime. It's like an anchor or a lifeline and a source of refreshing energy of course. And Kira is not only can wait, he won't break waiting as he is tough enough.

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mangust July 18 2008, 21:28:02 UTC
Than again, Kira is not that stable himself, he is prone to maniacal-depression. Gin is the supporting pillar of a sort.
.... ah I want to see the meeting. Kubo, draw faster!!! =))

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akai_o July 18 2008, 21:32:22 UTC
lolol, be patient, be patient! Wow, you write faster than I read. The story was very cute. It's funny, because I sort of dislike Kipling, but this one is funny. And the animation looks very interesting as well. However, I don't know, I am a little pessimistic over their meeting. Kubo usually touches at a subject but doesn't delve to deep in it, so I think all we will get is a hinting glare...I hope I am proved wrong.

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mangust July 18 2008, 21:54:11 UTC
I dare him to end the story with just hinting glare!!!! I curse Kubo to death!!! =)))

No, I belive we will het what we want in some way or another. It won't be as long as Soi-Fon story was though.
Kubo is very predictable when it comes to characters because he leave behind very solid piece of mazaic that can be analyzed. I wasn't wrong with Hirako, I bet I'm not wrong with Kira.
Kira and Momo has to do smth in the plot. Because they were not killed. And Kira's volume with darkness and Gin's hands... And the flashback of the three roads. No, I have hope and belief!

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mangust July 18 2008, 21:54:48 UTC
And I'm not only quick with writing ;) Not that you asked, but what I imagined.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v491/mangust/caveman.jpg

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akai_o July 18 2008, 21:59:16 UTC
omg, kira in a leopard attire! *squishes you* He he, poor cat has no idea what is in store for him bwahaha!

I don't know, I don't know, I hope too...but dammit it will take long. If it took 4 years to see Kira, it will take a decade until we see Gin and Kira together. I fear he will think it's of no importance to the general story...But, still I don't know, it could be used as a nice touch to enhance a mood or something.

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akai_o July 18 2008, 22:00:18 UTC
and god, how do you upload so fast. It takes me at least five minutes untill I've fully located myself in a web page

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mangust July 18 2008, 22:08:33 UTC
Figaro here, Figaro there =))

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mangust July 18 2008, 22:08:11 UTC
*sigh*... I hope next chapter is going to be about the fourth -_- But the story doesn't require it very much.
We will see. Kubo has a kink of sempai-kouhai, taichou-fukutaichou relationships. I myself anticipiting Liza-Nanao and Kensei-Shuhei meeting too.
I have my theory how these two will end, to see am I right or not is what keep the fire =)

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akai_o July 18 2008, 22:13:39 UTC
Oh yeah, the vizards still exist! I had almost forgotten about them...well at least those will keep up the interest.

Have to go to bed. I must wake up at 7 tomorrow to pick up some tickets. Wish you a goodnight and pleasant dreams!

Lol at Figaro, I had his marriages as a project on set design.

See you soon, kisses!

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akai_o July 18 2008, 22:14:13 UTC
I yawn so much that I am sure I am going to dislocate a jaw at some point.

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mangust July 18 2008, 22:19:26 UTC
haha, oyasumi nasai =)

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