For the first time EVER.

[ajlonginus]

Here's a new song I wrote. I'm posting for the sake of criticism.

I'm actually very pleased with it. I was just wanting thoughts, opinions, etc.
btw, the music for it is super cool too. ^_^
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Little Red Riding Hood

little red riding hood don't cover your eyes
don't be afraid I'm not a wolf in disguise
you're such a big girl in these dark dark woods
you can't go alone, even if you would

You think you know best and can't be mislead
but these paths are dark and will confuse your head
let someone help who has been on this way
don't try by yourself and tell me "good day"

Little red riding hood
you think you're grown up
you skip on your steps and look the other way
little red riding hood
the world is so big
wolves are out waiting with you as their prey.

You say you've been on paths like this before
there can't be much difference that you can't ignore
wolves are overrated you've seen them in the past
you know how to manage and deal with them fast.

"thanks for your help, I'll be moving right along"
and you skip down the lane with a smile and a song
little girl little girl when will you learn?
there is danger that lies in the soft pretty ferns

Little red riding hood
you think you're grown up
you skip on your steps and look the other way
little red riding hood
the world is so big
wolves are out waiting with you as their prey.

are you ok? I'll help you back on your path
see? I warned you, but that's enough of that
Where are we going? I promise you'll be safe
Put your hand in mine, and give me some faith

I've been here all along, but you had to see
and learn not everything is what you think it seems.
Come with me, I'll bring you out of these woods
You'll see a life you didn't you could.

Little red riding hood
you think you're grown up
you skip on your steps and look the other way
little red riding hood
the world is so big
wolves are out waiting with you as their prey.