I still think the story is bad and more for a fanfic, and there are some mistakes in the draw. But I finished something >w< the last time I did it was with my parody of Tsubasa Reservoir...and that was around 4 years ago. I can't believe I have done it, I got tired two times, but got to do it again ;A; It's the first time I use screentones too, I never have used them nor in the traditional way neither digitally. Now I have more confidence in myself, in spite of all I can do something ^^UU.
Here it's, it has a lot of mistakes, so feel free to tell me them ^__^