[PG-13] Wishing on Airplanes (5/?)

[airplanewishes]

Title: Wishing on Airplanes
Characters: Donghae, Kyuhyun, Hyukjae, OC, Super Junior
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance, Friendship, Comedy, Drama

Comments

[veezhi]

Me ish here! heehee. *evil grin* Now what should I say?
Jooyeon is an original character, right? What I like about this is that Jooyeon seemed to be an independent type of character in spite of the 'protection' offered to her. It's difficult to find someone like that lately but the thought that someone like her exists makes it all believable. I have a feeling her character will further develop throughout the story.

Taeyon... what do I say about her. For a moment I was scared she'll turn into this jealous Queen Bee. I'm still not sure if it will happen though but so far, I like her character.

I'll lump EunHae together because the scene where they're showing off their muscles is amusing. Oh Eunhae. haha. They should just stop being best friends here and start going out. haha!

Kyuhyun... his character is still someone 'new' and he seems like the typical I-am-snarky-but-really-an-affectionate-guy kind of character. It's amusing! haha. Although I can't really imagine him being in a leather jacket. OMG, that would be so hot. hahaha!

Okay, anyway, there are some points that I'm curious about. Who's Jungsu or Jungsoo or whatever the spelling of his name is and why is Jooyeon scared of him? oohhh... and the guys following her... might be his idea too?

Overall, it's an interesting read. You might want to check the use of 'points of view' sweetie. When I first started reading, I knew it's narrated from a third person POV but I think it's in the first and second chapter where the POVs suddenly shift. haha. That's really minor though.

And your writing does not suck so stop being all scared of me! *kick you* haha. Love you!

[airplanewishes]

Hiyaaa! Thank you for taking the time to actually read my stuff! I still think it sucks and not worthy for reading by you. Hahaha!

To answer your comment:
Yes, Jooyeon is an original character. I would like to think that she is independent. I don't know if she's still that in the future chapters.

I like Taeyeon. She's my favorite SNSD member. She's in all of my novels. Hahaha!

Hahahaha EunHae going out in this story would be hilarious!!!

Yes, Kyuhyun has that character. :) He's worn a leather jacket for SPAO already! Look for that picture! Hahaha! Hot. ;)

Jungsoo is someone from her past. You'll find out more in the later chapters. The guys following her are just that. You know how certain people just attract trouble. That's something kind of like this. I'll explain it further to you in the future.

The POVs. You're the second person to have commented on that and yeah, rereading it, it's confusing. Thank you! Hahaha as of now, I'm lazy to edit it. Someday. :))

Thanks so much again for reading even though it DOES suck! :D *huggles* Stop kicking me!

[veezhi]

I am going to kick you as many times as I like BECAUSE THIS DOES NOT SUCK! T^T