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khrysallis1106 July 7 2013, 03:57:51 UTC
WOW FRANCES YOU DESTROYED MY HEART. IT'S SHATTERED AND PROBABLY DOOMED TO NEVER BE WHOLE AGAIN.

cRIES I don't even know where to start commenting about this fic?? It's gorgeous in its own way, even if it's downright heart-wrenching to read (and I think I might have to start admitting that I'm a masochist at heart because THIS HURTS BUT IT'S SO GOOD???). I really feel for Baekhyun here, from her terrible husband to her imperfect relationship with Junmyeon even if Junmyeon's literally the perfect guy for her. You're right. I really do want to punt Kris off the nearest cliff in this fic. That asshole doesn't even deserve Baekhyun, for whatever he's done to her. And when he claimed that Baekhyun belonged to him, I was just like, what the fuck you bigoted asswipe stop right there with your male superiority.

A R G H

And god, Junmyeon is possibly the most.... I don't even know which word describes him best. Although I understand where he's coming from, with his reluctance to leave his son behind when he obviously cares for him so much, I'm just-- Sigh. He shouldn't have promised Baekhyun the world if he wasn't even close to 100% sure that he could stick through with his decision. I don't know. It's like giving someone a chance at life when they're on the brink of death, then laugh at them and withdraw that chance when they're about to reach for it.

I CAN'T COHERENT.

I really loved this ;w; Your characterisation, the pacing, the heartbreak - they're all perfect. ♥♥

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