Comments | airian_reesu: Chapter 14

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Chapter 14 - Part Two

Jan 27, 2009 00:02

( Angst and...a lover's heart Part TWO )

Comments 9

ladymusashi January 27 2009, 06:00:31 UTC

Ah, finally, the villain appears! Bwhahahahaha! I like it, Imai is hilarious as always. ^^ And cute too.

I have one complaint though (I think it was about time you gave me something to complain about after 14 chapters, lol) - somehow the angst level has reached the overload. I can understand uncertainties and, well, specific Japanese social norms, but Atsushi and Imai are both adult, men AND long-term friends and even the most introvert people on earth would find the way to talk to each other by now. Or (because they are men) act. This is not a huge complaint, just something to consider if you want to.

airian_reesu January 27 2009, 17:46:58 UTC

They'll do something about it soon. Don't worry.

But you're right. It is getting to the border of "too angsty". Mainly because Atsushi needed his chance. xD Imai takes charge soon. xD

(and, damn it, I typed Atusshi again! ><)

ladymusashi January 27 2009, 20:11:33 UTC

Oh-oh, Imai in charge! I SO want to read that. And Imai is happy too. ~_^

Now, that's an idea, you could rename the character in the story Atusshi and no one can say you are writing about the real people. *laughs*

airian_reesu January 28 2009, 02:11:25 UTC

I think my fingers are trying to rename him that, yes. xD

So the band will be Bluck-Tlick and Imai will be "Iami". xD

elvenlass January 27 2009, 23:55:01 UTC

Whoa!!!! Read part 1 before work and it almost killed me to wait to finish it. Wonderful!!!!

Moar? pleeeeezzzzzzzz?????

toujin1 January 31 2009, 04:30:44 UTC

I caught up! Really quickly I might add...dude, I have SO many things I had to do this morning and I touched nothing XD
AWESOME work, HORRIBLE cliffhanger, and I'm itching to read the next chapter!

airian_reesu January 31 2009, 04:32:38 UTC

Oh...wow! That was really fast! *shocked*

*I* have yet to sit down and reread this thing from the beginning...I'm kind of afraid to. XD

Even more pressure to get the next part done, huh? ~_^

Glad you enjoyed it though. ^__^

toujin1 January 31 2009, 04:34:37 UTC

Yup, got your reply this morning at nine, and have sat on my ass since then reading it. It's really strange cos I've loved this band for years, but recently I've been more obsessed than usual, so one could say that I found you at the best of times XD

airian_reesu January 31 2009, 04:37:33 UTC

B-T has a way of sucking people in, I've noticed. XDD

Glad to be off assistance (in getting nothing done. XD)