New Game +: Chapter 8, Human

[ainbthech]

Masterlist for New Game + available here.

Title: Human
Song Link: Human, behave yourself.
Characters: Silver, N, Black, Juniper, Black's Mother
Word Count: 1880

Comments

[quotemyfoot]

AAAH NO WHY IS THIS OVER

I mean that's not a bad place to end it, but. Not enough CynthiaLookerJulie everyone in my life.

I love this fic so much. The gender politics was handled really well and it helped carry the plot instead of vice versa. It really made me think too, especially with Crobat! So thank you for that. I love things that make me think.

Reading this hurt a lot, but in all the good ways. Your writing feels so simple but so evocative. I really felt a connection to everyone in this fic, which tbh is not something I find all that often (I am obviously looking in all the wrong places), but especially Silver -- not just for sad things, I could feel the moments when he was happy or at least positive too. It made this fic such a joy to read, I am so envious of your ability to write like that.

Also Looker was badass and amazing and I loved him to bits. I would love to see more of that guy.

Anyway, I hope you do continue this for the next BB, or whenever you have the time; I would really like to see where you take it from here.

Thanks for writing this!

[ainbthech]

Thank you so much for reading it and commenting! And I am glad that you liked it! Your comments make me really happy. :) It's over because there was a due date, mostly, with a side of the further I went the more my outline stretched on forever even though I kept making words. I am currently leaning toward continuing this for the next Big Bang although we'll see what happens.

Thanks again! :)