THE MORTAL INSTRUMENTS: Everything In-Between - Alec/Clary

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oh jesus bale i just

i can't

what are you doing to my emotions i can't even

where have you been all of my life.

*falls over dead*

Okay, haha, overwhelmed-with-~FEELINGS time done now. But seriously, this, like everything you write, is so gorgeous. And just. I can see Alec thinking all these things. The writing, the way it flows - it's majestic, almost and it's got that quiet kind of strength that carries on under all the doubts and self-conciousness and it's just so undeniably Alec that you can't see it as anything else. And tbh, I didn't read the whole notes thing at the beginning, I never do because sometimes they spoil things for me, and hoshit, I am so glad I didn't because I read it and the sixth part took me by such shock, then I went up and read it again and I felt like I could pinpoint the moment where he starts to love her a little.

And oh, the fourth section was just. It was gorgeous, and I feel like it really kind of hammered home what being from another world thrust into another that you belong in as well really means. She didn't grow up with the prejudices and the old ways of thinking any more than she grew up with the knowledge and power that came along with it. She came into the latter on her own right and it just. It changes things, so much. And I feel like you put that perfectly and eloquently and gah my emotions are frizzling out of control again I just love this okay.

And what Clary says at the beginning of six... that was so wonderful, to me, and I felt like I was going to cry when I read that. It was so simply stated and just. Gah. Plus, the whole Clary/Alec part... I think one person described it as 'embers,' and I feel like it's accurate. It's that low, consuming burn that happens when you just love someone for a reason you can't quite pinpoint that rests under the surface. And like they also say, I can totally see this being a pairing, because I feel like Jace is a kind of firework, and you can never really stop loving him but there's just too many parts of him that you just can't find long enough to keep. Magnus, too, he's eternal and he's watched so many people he's loved grow old and die, that he just can't do it much longer. And I can't really hate them at all for that, even knowing they've probably broken so many people's hearts because of it.

And also you just gave me all the emotions at this part
“How do I know if they deserve it?” Alec asked.
on.

So yeah, I really love your writing and the way you portray the characters just take the internet please kthx.

this is what happens when i word vomit on characters they just get analyzed and i rhapsodize everyone to death i am so sorry

I'm sorry I just really love this and you just give me so many otps that I can only fully appreciate when you write them why do you write my babies so perfectly do you know what it does to me do you?