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[fic] As the Maiden of Deception Falls

Nov 17, 2011 10:23

Title: As the Maiden of Deception Falls.
Summary: Sometimes there was no such thing as peace and quiet.
Rating: PG-13.
Word Count: 1917.
Pairing: Kyouko Sakura/Sayaka Miki.
AN: This was started, and almost finished, back at the beginning on August. I've just finished it off today but I'm not too happy with how i has turned out. D: I don't remember what ( Read more... )

fiction: fanfic, character: sakura kyouko, character: miki sayaka, animanga: mahou shoujo madoka★magica

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seireeii December 20 2011, 00:26:22 UTC

Hey there! I absolutely LOVE this! It's amazing, and beautiful, and just awesome! The description is flawless; it draws the reader in, and has its own haunting, lingering tone to it that I love when writers use. I'm not that big a fan of Kyouko/Sayaka, but this story was absolutely lovely, and please, do write more for them! I love your style, and I'll be adding you on FF.net, if that's alright with you. Absolutely wonderful job. xD

aimeeshii December 21 2011, 23:43:18 UTC

Sorry that I've only just round to reading your comment! I must say, I think you're mad for looking that far into my writing! That's probably the biggest compliment I've received about it and my brain just can't handle it. xD

seireeii December 22 2011, 02:36:48 UTC

It's what a fellow writer does, my friend. xD Praise is the best thing you can give someone for writing something, and you definitely deserve it here. Really? I'm flattered. I'm just doing my job as a fellow writer! xD Please, do write more fics and post them on here or FF.net! xD I LOVE your style, and I think I could learn a lot from it.

I typically use first person, but ever since I got into KHR, I've been forced to use third since I don't know the characters very well. The way you write third person is pretty much what I want my third person style to be: haunting, lingering, soft, smooth. I want mine to make an impact, and stick with the reader throughout the duration of it. Yours is flawless in that aspect, so, if it's not too awkward to say, please write more! xD I have a feeling I can learn a lot from you. xD (Like, this comment isn't AT ALL random and creepy...I apologize...)

aimeeshii December 22 2011, 02:44:50 UTC

Where do you post your fics? I'd love to read them sometime! What fandoms are they usually for, too? I'll try to! I mostly post my het stories on here and my, uh, not so het ones on FF as that's what is expected from me. "orz

I've been writing in first person since I started last year and I've only recently been forcing myself to write in third. I find it awkward and I just don't like it, haha. xD First person is where my heart is! My first story was first person in Kyouya's POV (even though it was a troll) so I've just stuck with that and went along with it for all this time. ;w;

seireeii December 22 2011, 03:06:13 UTC

I'm going to start posting my fics on this site, but I have a FF.net account! I added you as a favorite, Ryouko Akizakura is my fanfic account name. xD I have yet to change it to this name. =) Well, most of them are for Naruto...Sadly. SasuSaku was my OTP for the longest time, and then I found Hibari/Chrome from KHR, and that all changed. xD I also like to do crossovers, but I generally stick to het pairings. I'm not adversed to Yuri or Yaoi, I just don't enjoy them as much (I've gotten more of an open mind about it though! xD ( ... )

aimeeshii December 22 2011, 03:22:15 UTC

Awesome! I look forward to seeing you spam on here then. How do you normally come up with your names? I have no idea how I got this one. I clicked onto fan fiction last year and saw that I already had an account on there with this name. Apparently I've been a member since 2008 LOL. Who knew? I certainly don't remember. xD I've never watched/read Naruto because of the rude fan base, do you recommend it? ;O; Oh, Kyouya/Chrome! I think they're a cute couple, especially when it's done right. There are no good stories on FF with that pairing, though. Haha, it's whatever suits you!

It may seem like my favourite pairing is Dino/Kyouya, but in fact it's Kyouya/Bluebell. :P I think they're lovely together! And I seem to be the only writer/artist that does anything for them.

Is that so? I think it might be what we start with then. But I was always taught to write in third person growing up and it never turned out well. Haha! For Kyouya, I literally have a friend IRL who acted like him. (This was before I got into KHR) She'd only let me hug ( ... )

seireeii December 22 2011, 04:12:57 UTC

I just uploaded it a few seconds ago! xD I was finishing it up while I was talking to you! xD My name for my fanfiction account was the same name as my former OC. I used it because I thought it sounded cool, but I really like this username better, to be honest! xD But, I'd take a Japanese name you like, then add a surname you like as well! xD But I think "Aimeeshii" is a lot more unique and cooler than "Ryouko Akizakura". xD ( ... )

aimeeshii December 22 2011, 04:51:48 UTC

I'll make sure to get round to reading it when I'm on my computer! F-former OC? Why would you get rid of her? She has an awesome name! The only OCs I have are art ones and they only have first names. But I've scrapped most of them by now, so I have none. Your one sounds cool! I just added “shii” onto my name. What the hell is a shii? LOL. Silly, silly, fourteen-year-old me.

Hmm... I'm usually the type to stick to comedy, romance and horror, not normally shounen. I find it quite boring and predictable. xD (I didn't like KHR at all. Actually, I still don't. Friend made me watch it all, and I don't read the manga. I just like three characters.) I've never looked into Naruto, Bleach, One Piece...

They're cute together! Chrome's sweet, but I hate that name. Chrome. Uck. xD If I ever include her in a fic, I mostly keep her as Nagi. I have a huge thing for eye patches, so I somehow give her one. Injure her, idek. xD Dino/Kyouya is hot! You just missed D18 day where lots and lots of stuff came out for them. Yeees, come to the Bluebell side ( ... )

seireeii December 23 2011, 02:44:44 UTC

Will you, please? I'm desperate for feed-back so that I know if I can continue writing them or not! I'm worried that I destroyed them...=( Yep, former OC. I made two more. One's named Kiyoko Sakura, the other is Reika Akihabara. I use Reika Akihabara for my own fictions, and Kiyoko Sakura was one I discarded as well. I really like Reika right now, so I'm sticking with her at the moment. xD Ryouko Akizakura's still the name of my FF.Net account until I change it to this one. xD I can make you one, if you're interested? O.o ( ... )

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