[fic] As the Maiden of Deception Falls

[aimeeshii]

Title: As the Maiden of Deception Falls.
Summary: Sometimes there was no such thing as peace and quiet.
Rating: PG-13.
Word Count: 1917.
Pairing: Kyouko Sakura/Sayaka Miki.
AN: This was started, and almost finished, back at the beginning on August. I've just finished it off today but I'm not too happy with how i has turned out. D: I don't remember what

Comments

[eternalilith]

That was a beautiful fic with great emphasis on the surroundings as well as Kyouko and Sayaka's expressions. It's probably just a short scene if it were to be animated, but the ending got me smiling, because it was really somewhat sweet.

You write such pretty stories even if they're not romance-based. *salutes you* <3

[aimeeshii]

Sweet? Haha, I wasn't intending it to be like that at all! I don't really know what I wanted in the end; I was writing in the library while waiting for me lesson whilst you were afk. It kind of just all came out and I went with the flow, I guess.

Not romance-based? ;°A° There was this line:

“Become a peasant with me.” which in Aimee languages means... “Hey, let's be poor together and elope. No family.”

*salutes you right back, sister!* <3

[eternalilith]

But it gave me the impression that it was! xD Now you can work on Yui's prompt LOLOL. 8D

HAHAHAHA! I don't see it that way though! I was thinking that Kyouko was becoming more of an elder sister guiding the younger one with that line, like sibling love. I could never learn your language LMAO.

[aimeeshii]

Oh gosh, ice cubes. I can see this being so cracky! I will definitely use your idea, though. Papa Yui will adore it lmao! Her two daughters becoming one with a crack story~

I should write one of them translation dictionaries LOL. As in the French > English one, but Aimee > Yuka LOLOL.

[eternalilith]

LOL! You mean the one with an ice cube as a reward for my dog? xD I'm sure it'll turn out to be terrific! <3

But I don't know French, at all. D: All the translations will turn out wrong LMAO.

[aimeeshii]

But of course that one! It's most likely either going to be crack and make no sense at all or pointless porn that I can't write since one of the characters has ovaries. >.> LMAO.

SHHHH IT WILL WORK. EXPERIENCED TRANSLATORS WILL WRITE IT LOL.

[eternalilith]

I wish it'll be crack though! xD It doesn't have to make sense as long as they're all in character, I think. LOLOLOL. YOU KNOW I CAN'T READ PORN. D8

BUT WE'RE NOT EXPERIENCED TRANSLATORS LMAO! New study into the Aimee-language is in process. xD

[aimeeshii]

You can read porn, it just scars your virgin eyes forever and ever and causes you to burst into flames, hahaha! I don't know Gokudera! *cries*

LMAO HIRE SOMEONE TO NOTE DOWN EVERYTHING I SAY AND THEN ASK PEOPLE FOR TRANSLATIONS LOL.

[eternalilith]

I-I don't want to burst into flames LOL! Porn is too mind-scarring for me to handle. xD Gokudera is angry towards Haru most of the time because he sees her as a "stupid woman", and he's ever-so-loyal to Tsuna because he opened up his eyes to a brighter world, I think. xD Gokudera should be easy for you!

OMG THAT SOUNDS LIKE A STALKER. RECORDING EVERYTHING YOU SAY, EVEN IN THE SHOWER. D8

[aimeeshii]

It's too late, you're going to burst into flames! All the fire is building up within your chest. Gokudera sounds so lame, haha!

NOO MY SECRET MOON LANGUAGE IN THE SHOWER WILL BE DISCOVERED.

[eternalilith]

How did it build up when I haven't been reading porn at all? xD Gokudera is a comic relief character in my book, and Haru plays along~ 8D

LOLOLOL SECRET MOON LANGUAGE. XD THEY'LL RECORD EVERYTHING AND LABEL YOU AS A NEW SPECIES.

[aimeeshii]

Your ovaries have been neglected so they are burning up. Gokudera is crazy! A crazy fanboy!

NOOO MY MOON LANGUAGE WILL BE COMMON KNOWLEDGE. THEY'LL PUT ME IN A ZOO ONLY WHEN I'M IN THE SHOWER LOL.

[eternalilith]

Nooo it can't be LMAO. I give them lots of nutrition by eating chocolates too! He's such a fanboy that no one denies it. xD Now you know how to write him!

JUST LIKE HOW ENGLISH IS THE NORM FOR YOUR PEOPLE? XD OMG, SO YOU GO TO THE ZOO FOR A SHOWER. THAT'S AMAZING.

[aimeeshii]

Chocolate is not nutrition for your ovaries, you silly cow LOL. F-fanboy... I'm imagining "fanboy" as some type of superhero with his pants on the outside of his trousers. Stylish.

NOOOO. NO ZOO SHOWERS, PLEASE.

[eternalilith]

But doesn't chocolate work for every part of your body? D: HAHAHA why do you give me that image too? Ice cube reward for superhero fanboy Gokudera. My brain just melted. xD

I DON'T WANT PEOPLE IN THE ZOO WATCHING YOU SHOWER EITHER LMAO.