Oh great, so now the comment bar pops up with great speed and adroitness, when I don't really have a need for it. *Kicks stupid, controversial computer*
I did not reply because of my shitty computer, which is now not stuffing up...*Rollz eyes* It comes, it goes...same difference.
And you never comment on mine, but never mind. *Doesn't really care*
Anyway. Your poem, if the damn window would please open. *Taps fingers*
Nice. Abstract. Playfulness of its own. Like the alliteration, sounds brilliant. Smooth, like music. Have no idea why you stuck "dirty" in a stanza of its own, and can't see any connection. Think "A lump of metal could say anything" is a brilliant ending, because we all know what its saying (WEll, I do, but then, I'm *Gutter, gutter*).
I suck at critique.
And do not mumble and hide because I replied. Otherwise, I will drag you out of your hiding place, and glare. *Brings out multitude of weapons* But no spiders in your hidey-hole, please. *Meep!* *Dislikes spiders* I don't care if they're important ecologically, they have no place on my body.
I did not reply because of my shitty computer, which is now not stuffing up...*Rollz eyes* It comes, it goes...same difference.
And you never comment on mine, but never mind. *Doesn't really care*
Anyway. Your poem, if the damn window would please open. *Taps fingers*
Nice. Abstract. Playfulness of its own. Like the alliteration, sounds brilliant. Smooth, like music. Have no idea why you stuck "dirty" in a stanza of its own, and can't see any connection. Think "A lump of metal could say anything" is a brilliant ending, because we all know what its saying (WEll, I do, but then, I'm *Gutter, gutter*).
I suck at critique.
And do not mumble and hide because I replied. Otherwise, I will drag you out of your hiding place, and glare. *Brings out multitude of weapons* But no spiders in your hidey-hole, please. *Meep!* *Dislikes spiders* I don't care if they're important ecologically, they have no place on my body.
~ Starsong
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I do not mumble and hide.
And you don't suck at critique...
Thanks sweetie.
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