FIC: With Eyes Wide Open, Part I

Apr 12, 2005 15:06


Title: With Eyes Wide Open

Author: Aillil

Rating: Hard R for somewhat graphic sex

Summary: Remus and Sirius take their friendship further, but not quite in the way you think.

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ballyharnon April 12 2005, 21:11:24 UTC
This is pretty hardcore awesome. *goes to read part 2*

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Wow... aillil April 13 2005, 10:03:02 UTC
...such a compliment from the seriously gifted Ballyharnon... *swoons*
Thank you very much.

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krazykate1332 May 31 2005, 10:56:31 UTC
wow...yeah, wow. The story is amazing! I love the playful banter that shows how close their friendship is. I love the hint of insecurity in Sirius when he asks for a 'follow up'. The sexy aspect...well, it was sexy...we'll leave it at that. I also love the confidence that Remus shows in this fic...he shouldn't have a reason to feel shy with Sirius. This is a very good story so far, and very realistic too.

The pics are awesome, they really add to the story, but they would stand up on their own too. Very lifelike, and even if I weren't crazy for Remus and Sirius, I would think they are cute. You can really sense how comfortable they are with each other in the one where they're sleeping. Very nice job.

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aillil May 31 2005, 13:15:59 UTC
Thank you very much. :)

It's one of my pet peeves that Remus and Sirius are so often displayed as virtually pouncing on each other, then having sex once, and then all tension is resolved. I don't think it works that way, not in a friendship so close as theirs is. And Remus is not a wilting flower, as fleshdress once put it, he isn't just a huge mountain of complexes, actually I think he has a lot less complexes than Sirius does.

I'm very glad it worked for you, and Remeciel is one gifted artist, isn't she? It's absolutely marvellous how she managed to convey the comfort that exists between those two.

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sam_can_do_it June 21 2006, 03:51:05 UTC
I should win a prize for the fact that I'm actually pausing to comment before just clicking the link to part II. This is SOO brilliant that I can't wait for the next part. It doesn't hurt that the pictures are beautiful as well!

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aillil June 21 2006, 06:44:46 UTC
Ooooh, thank you. :) *hands you prize* And remeciel plus art is much, much adored by me. :)

Your icon is totally sweet. ♥

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elibeth_hobbit March 31 2009, 17:25:50 UTC
Just back for a reread. This is one of my favorites.
Oh, and have I told you how hot it is that Remus plays violin and Sirius the viola? I just wondered, though, why did you give Sirius the more mellow instrument? I was just curius.

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aillil April 7 2009, 06:35:10 UTC
Thanks for your comment. I'm glad you like the story so much. :)

It's been a while since I wrote this, so I'm a little hazy on my reasons for anything in it by now, but I seem to remember that Sirius playing the violin was precisely what I didn't think likely. The viola suited his character rather more in my opinion, because there's more to him than just the vacuous party animal many make him out to be. :)

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