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[ailes_de_verre]

Title "I hate him"
Author ailes_de_verre
Beta None. Please bear with my mistakes
Pairing Kinney/Taylor
Timeline Season 1
Disclaimer Mr Kinney and Mr Taylor belong to Cowlip and each other, but they let me play^^
Words count 200 words
A/N Written for prompt #173 @ Drabylon

Title "I hate him"
Author ailes_de_verre
Beta None. Please bear with my mistakes
Pairing Kinney/Taylor

Comments

[rainbow1907]

Awww, this is beautiful, I love it :) And this line here is made of awesome:

On Justin’s it’s Bri an, two short emissions of breath making me want come inside him over and over, so I can feel my name quietly broken in two, dissonant, musical.

Only one thing, I hope it's okay to say that, sorry - I think it should say "thighs" and not "tights"?

Anyway, thanks so much for this drabble ♥

Hugs, Rena

[ailes_de_verre]

thanks so much for the comment Rena, it means a lot to me, especially since i've written such a few things in the QAF fandom that i really need to get my hand at it. and thanks for the grammar check, you are totally right and it's great that you pointed it out. I'll correct that immediately. I should really go and look for a beta, i've seen that there is a community for that...
Hugs!

[rainbow1907]

Having a beta really helps, I have to agree on that. And it reduces the nervousness after posting something ;) If you aren't successful at the community I might know someone who could do your beta.
*hugs*

[ailes_de_verre]

rena, feel free to point me to a beta, sweetie

[chloris01]

I found your drabble yesterday, and I just wanted to tell you how much I like it !
It's a very beautiful way to show how much Brian cares about Justin, even if he can't admit his feelings.