Comments | aijou_aibou: [fic] Coming Forth by Sundown, Chapter 12

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[fic] Coming Forth by Sundown, Chapter 12 - Yugioh, drama/romance, PG-13

Feb 06, 2009 21:04

Title: Coming Forth by Sundown
Author: Chey (duelist_gurl163)
Chapter: 12/13
Overall rating: PG-13
Genre: Drama/romance
Pairings: YamixYugi, JouxMai, and references to YugixAnzu and YamixAnzu
Archive: You're lookin' at it
Warnings: None
Spoilers: Post-series, so many spoilers, including Yami's real name.
Summary: His was a story that ended in ( Read more... )

fanfiction: yugioh, genre: drama, pairing: jounouchi/mai, story type: chapter, genre: romance, pairing: 'atemu'/yugi, fic: coming forth by sundown, rating: pg-13

Comments 11

kurunya February 7 2009, 03:33:03 UTC

As much as it pains me, I have to realize that Yugi might not get that happy ending I am looking for so...I only wish it was a good ending you hear!!?
But over all, I love it. ;_; They finally said what they needed to say and I am happy at least on that part.

But I am still sad for Atemu.

;-; GOOD LUCK ON YOUR CARD THINGY. I can't play the card games for the life of me. XD

aijou_aibou February 8 2009, 14:11:35 UTC

I know you do, I wish it was too. =/ But I still think it's a "good" ending! Maybe not sunshine and butterflies, but good in some ways? Hopefully chapter 13 will show it.
I'm glad you enjoyed it even if it wasn't what you were hoping for though. =)

Thanks! xD

vixenonthemoor February 7 2009, 03:41:12 UTC

You made me cry and I'm not comming after you to lynch you, don't worry. You did say it would have a good ending, or at least not a terribly sad one, so I'm waiting for the next chapter before I go looking for my pitchfork.

Well done, very poigent.

aijou_aibou February 8 2009, 14:12:24 UTC

*peeks out of bomb shelter* Thank you, I appreciate that. I'm glad the poigency came across. ^^

strawberrykaoru February 7 2009, 03:49:10 UTC

*BAWLS*

Picking up brain pieces at the moment (after Week of Doom), so I can't give a proper review, but I LOVED IT. YES. THE ANGST. SO GOOD. YES.

...YES.

Missed a line break here:
“Aibou.” He reached out and tilted Yugi’s head up to meet his eyes as tears suddenly escaped down his face.
Yugi’s eyes widened. Atemu…you’re crying. You never let yourself cry in front of me…

YES. THE ANGST.

aijou_aibou February 8 2009, 14:14:05 UTC

*pats and offers a tissue* I understand Week of Doom. ^^; I hope your brain is feeling a little better...

Ack. I knew I'd missed something, I was posting faster than usual. Fixed it. xD

Thanks for the comment. x3

ladydragon323 February 8 2009, 00:58:47 UTC

*falls to knees* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Eff I love this fic

aijou_aibou February 8 2009, 14:14:54 UTC

*giggles at the imagry* I'm sorry...it kind of had to be this way. ;_;

Glad to hear you love it though. =D Thanks for sticking with it all this time!

momduels February 8 2009, 16:17:19 UTC

Nooo! Too sad. I want happy! Why can't it be happy.....going to find my pitchfork now

PS - I did have fun yesterday!

duelist_gurl163 February 11 2009, 19:43:24 UTC

Okay, now see that wouldn't be fair, because even if you pitchfork me, you've got access to my flashdrive with the last chapter. xD

momduels February 11 2009, 20:27:04 UTC

But you know duelists have honor! I would never look...well except maybe if I had to....no would never do that and I wouldn't let Michelle either. Yami would not approve!