[fic] Smile - Yugioh, YYxY, humour/fluff, G, theme 1

May 30, 2008 13:08

Title: Smile
Author: Chey (duelist_gurl163)
Theme: 1 - “I would go anywhere to get to you, so why is it that all you have to do is smile to get to me?” for 50_lovequotes
Rating: G
Genre: Humour/fluff
Parings: YamixYugi, very vague JouxMai
Archive: You're lookin' at it
Warnings: AU-ish

Spoilers: None

Summary:  Choosing an outfit for a first date is harder ( Read more... )

rating: g, genre: humour, pairing: yami/yugi, fanfiction: yugioh, pairing: jounouchi/mai, story type: one-shot, writing challenge: 50_lovequotes, genre: fluff

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strawberrykaoru May 30 2008, 18:08:09 UTC
*giggles* This was definitely good break-reading-material. *dies of the fluff* Everything about this was so adorable - Yuugi throwing a panic over clothes, Mai's easy persuasion over Jou's insistent 'fine's' (the 'naked' suggestion had me laughing a lot...typical Jou xD), and Yami blushing. (OMG HE'S BLUSHING. The sun must be rising from the West or something. And I'll bet he was peeking out the window every five seconds to check if Yuugi arrived yet. >_>)

Yes, definitely leave the fashion sense to the ladies...or at least the ones who are sensitive. xD

Yami could have worn anything -- *wiggles eyebrows* Are you sure about that, Yuugi? *shot* XDD

Also, I'm not quite sure if the verb you wanted for this line (and bopped out of the room happily) was quite right. Bop? Or hop? Threw me off a bit, but otherwise, cute. Very, indeed. ^_^

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duelist_gurl163 May 30 2008, 18:55:47 UTC
Yaye, good break-reading material! I'm glad. ^_^ And yaye, all these compliments make me happy. xD Thank you!! I'm glad you liked it. =D
Yami blushing FTW. <3

Actually that was intentional. xD Now that I think about it, 'bop' used in this context might just be a southern term or something. It's like...walking cheerfully/bouncing/skipping...a movement like that. xD;;

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momduels May 30 2008, 20:47:21 UTC
Yeah that was fun. Yugi worried about what to wear with Joey giving advice? Too funny. Good think Mai stepped in. I needed that as a good beginning to my weekend.

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duelist_gurl163 May 31 2008, 00:26:28 UTC
Joey isn't very good with fashion. xD But he's a guy, so...can't blame him I suppose. Fluff is always a good weekend starter.

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jumblebelle June 5 2008, 06:59:35 UTC
Gah, I missed this somehow. x_X I was just waiting for Jou to suggest going naked. XD Yay!~ I love the mental image of Yuugi preparing to whack Jou with his belt, and an exasperated Mai handling Jounouchi's cluelessness. XD Good fluff! ♥

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duelist_gurl163 June 5 2008, 13:05:32 UTC
Cause we all know Jou would think of it that way. ^^;;
Thanks!

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kurunya July 23 2008, 14:42:14 UTC
“Then why don’t you just go over naked?”

BEST LINE EVER. :D I loveee Jou when he acts like that~ XDDD Awesome!

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duelist_gurl163 July 23 2008, 16:55:59 UTC
xDD Jou makes me happy. x3 Thank you!

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