[fic] Before Morning - Yugioh, YYxY, romance/angst, R, theme 8

[aijou_aibou]

Title: Before Morning
Author: Chey (duelist_gurl163)
Theme: 8 - “I would rather have thirty minutes of wonderful than a lifetime of nothing special.” for 50_lovequotes
Rating: R
Genre: Romance/angst
Parings: YamixYugi
Archive: You're lookin' at it
Warnings: Sexual yaoi situation

Spoilers: Yami's real name

Summary: He should have stopped him, but this was

Comments

[strawberrykaoru]

I did an obligatory sleeping-together-before-the-Ceremonial-Duel-fic too. And yes, it's a wonderful addiction to our portfolios. 8D

That was just - Yugi - it made me cry. T__T And just, just...;q2;3oifa;lksdjf;oiqawekfa;sdijfas!!!! *breathes* Listening to sad sountracks doesn't help either. Oh Atemu, you can never deny what Yugi wants, can you? Very, very well-written, I loved Atemu's thoughts interjecting the scenes - his guilt (no matter how much he wanted this) amplified the angst a lot, and...asdfjkl;! I'm going to breathe elsewhere...where it's not so angsty now. ;____;

So...*in an attempt to be more cheerful* Was Yugi on top? ^__~

[duelist_gurl163]

I really think it's a requirement of being a Puzzleshippy fanfic writer, you just have to write one of those at some point. xD

Aw...*pats* Be nice to your keyboard now, pounding random letters probably isn't good for it. Thank you for the positive words~ ^_^ This comment made me happy. x3

...If you want him to be, sure, why not. xD

[greenxwingedfae]

Dang, so sad!

But nce too, even tho I'm not a Puzzleshipper. I do like good writing tho. :)

Hope you feel better. :)

[duelist_gurl163]

Thank you! ^_^

[jumblebelle]

It's only cliched/overdone because it's good. XD

Yuugi was very, very good, especially during the part about Mou Hitori no Yuugi's real name. And I liked the italicized bits - thoughts as narration gave you the chance to put more feeling into it and made it very...pretty. ^^; And yes, it was an angst amplifier. XD
This fic on its own didn't feel cliched because you had a lot of thought and emotion behind it (instead of just the... *cough* smex) - so well done! ^^

And I nearly cried, Puzzleshippers are far too emotional. XD.

[duelist_gurl163]

xD True, true.

Thank you very much for all the compliments! ^_^ A very nice ego-boost for the day. xD Really, I'm glad you liked it. =]
Haha...yeah, I'm VERY much against lust-only Puzzleshipping. There has to be emotion, which is why any fic involving smex will be mostly emotions instead of physical. ^^;

There's nothing wrong with that. v.v

[jumblebelle]

Your welcome! ^^ Everybody needs an ego boost every now and then. XD

Of course not...except for when you're in the car and there's a song on the radio that would match Puzzleshipping perfectly and it makes you cry and then your parents think you need mental help because you burst into sudden fits of tears all the time for no apparent reason...then it kind of sucks.

^^;

[duelist_gurl163]

Ahh...haha...yeah. That's happened to me one too many times. v.v Luckily though, I turned my mom into a Puzzleshipper, so now she understands when I randomly start squeeing and/or crying over a Puzzleshippy song. >3

[aijou_aibou]

Eep...I'm sorry!

But thank you! I love it when people point out what lines they really liked. I dunno...I guess it just feels nice. xD Especially in a fic like this that is a little outside my normal writing box. So thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it. =D

[kurunya]

;_; That's so sad...the emotion, you written it down so well!! ;_;

-Nyago

[duelist_gurl163]

Ee, thank you! ^^