Haunted: Chapter 16 - FINAL

[aidill]

Title: Haunted (16/16) - FINAL CHAPTER
Pairing: Ohmiya
Summary: Ohno inherits a big and ramshackle mansion from a distant relative, but there is much more in his new house than it seems at first sight.
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 1262
Disclaimer: The plot is mine, and the wrapping is thanks to zazasukie ^__^
AN: Un-betaed and english isn't my mother tongue.

Comments

[madisonfink]

OMG I LOVED IT

I'm crying..no....teary eyed, oh my Arashi that was awesome!

and then Niji at the end perfect

I love it

have I said that enough I love it? Becuase I do, that's so perfect, not rushed at all, I gasped btw when Sho said the following "When I gave him my name and mentioned that I was your friend, his expression changed a bit and he said with a high-pitched voice: “Ah! So you’re Sakurai Sho? I’m pleased to meet you!”. He was smiling brightly, but I could swear that I heard him muttering something that sounded suspiciously like “That twerp! Oh-chan almost died because of him!”.

Ahh it's everything and more, thank you for making me sound like a fan girl ^///^.

[aidill]

I'm so happy that you have enjoyed this series! ^___________^

Niji was perfect to represent the feelings between Ghost!Nino (not a ghost anymore XD) and Oh-chan!
Poor Sho, Nino has taken his promised revenge on him! ^___~

Thank you very much for reading and commenting in my first fic ever! (Yep, I began with a series XD)

[madisonfink]

Waaa~ When I first started fanfics I think I did one shots till I was okay writing more in depth, I wouldn't imagine this was your first one, it's beautifully written can't wait for more of your stuff.

[aidill]

I also wanted to start with a one-shot or something similar, but the idea was so good that I didn't want to compress it in a long one-shot so... it had to be a series! XD

In addition, I got help from zazasukie to wrap the story nicely and to change some things to make it better!

Thanks again for your kind comments!

Stay tuned for my next series (still in development stage XD)!

[jamasunda]

*dies*

*cries*

*dies again* <3333333

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[aidill]

Hey! Hey! Don't die on me or you'll miss my next fics! ^___~

Thanks a lot for reading the complete series! ^____^

[is248]

what a great way to end!! I said this because I love this song too...I can even imagine how Nino-chan is sitting on the chair playing the piano while looking at Oh-chan at the same time...

so cute >_____<"
I was hoping to see some of romance stuff but I look at the top of the page and see that you have already set this fic for PG! hehehe oh well I can do the extra thinging in my own imagination, right!

thank you so much. this is such a great fic and I am looking forward to another one...Onegaishimasu!

(^_____^)//

[aidill]

>///< Thanks! I also love this song~

Well, I don't think a ever go over pg-13 (and it was only for the views XD) in my fics... but we can always imagine Ohmiya sweet interaction, right? ^___~

I'm preparing another series, but is still in its development stage so I don't know when I'd be able to post it.

Thanks a lot for reading this series and for your kind comments!

[glos10]

so it all went as planned !!!!!!!!!
*happiness*

oh, I love happy endings *__*
Lately I only read fic in wich aiba died *dunno why aiba XD*

I still feel so bad about sumire, though.
That part of the story had me very very sad... true love, friend-love, love of people grown together, it is hard to undestrand our own emotions... it's easy to make mistakes, but her "mistake" had to be made...
And thinking about nino's eyes when he realized she didn't love him as he did, I think that such a thing will be unbearable for me, I'll probably kill myself if I was her...
*cries*

but then, finally, at least nino had his life, again, and Love ^_^

thank you :)

[aidill]

I love happy endings too! ^____^
Poor Sumire! She got the worst part of the deal... but she finally moved on and continued with her life so... it's not so bad, right?

Happy Ohmiya = Everybody is happy! ^___~

Thank you very much for reading my fic!

[aidill]

>////< Thanks! I'm really happy you liked this fic!

I'm planning another series, but it's still in its development stage. ^___^

Thanks a lot for reading!