[YamaChii] One Hundred Thousand Years
One Hundred Thousand Years
© aitan
Pairing: YamaChii Genre: AU, Romance
Summary: Even if it took him one hundred thousand of years, his words still remained honest and true. Just like his, “I love you.”
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( Ryosuke words, they were like salvation into Yuri’s soul. They were like eternity being unfolded into his un-beating heart. Because god, he missed this. Yuri badly missed this. He missed his Ryosuke so much-so very, very much. Because more than his eternal life or even the world itself. His Ryosuke is everything that immortality couldn’t and wouldn’t give to him. Ryosuke is Yuri’s pilgrimage. He is Yuri’s piece of heaven. He is Yuri’s life-Yuri’s Holy Grail. )
That was different than your usual, I think, in terms of content. Not the writing, it's still lovely, but the... What's it called? I wonder if I can say "characters" here, but not YamaChii themselves but... the form they take. You know? Is this making sense?
But even if it's not something I've seen from Ai-chan before, new things isn't bad. I enjoyed it! I was confused at first because I wasn't expecting it but then it all made sense about half way through and I liked it a lot. It's short, which works because I think if it was any longer it would be too... What's the word? Anyways, it's the perfect length for what it is. (I'm out of it today with my knowledge of how to speak and form words)
It's great, you did a good job Ai-chan. I don't know what you're talking about when you say you don't know how to write anymore. I think it's lovely, you know. (And I promise I'm not biased!) It's not my most favourite story of yours, but I did really like it.
I'll end my commentary here then. I'm off to read the other fic, though as soon as I saw "Titanic" I knew I was going to cry at some point. I'm prepared!
-- Kennyan
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