lemme go through it again...there is a typo "air" for "ear" "The shell of her air....
And is Giles quoting the lyrics...or is this him being inspired. I admit that I was a teeny bit jarred, um, since I was planning on using the hand behind your head thing as a description of him as a lover in a fic of mine....but I don't think that some one who was unfamiliar with the song would notice, because the imagery is quite beautiful....
No it's not him quoting the lyrics, that's why I kind of had a little creative license with them - it's meant to be his words - but does that not work you think?
Reni got me hooked on this song a week ago and we have been talking about writing a fic based on it. She started and then got very frustrated - and then i gave a suggestion and then before I knew it she had practically forced the task on me *grin*. It scared the hell out of me and I struggled for days! Then she comes and tears down my writer's block and my muse came back today! Phew - it was terrifying. And please, this song is so amazing - I hope to see the line in your fic as well. BG fic right??? NOt WG fic right??? You got me so damn hooked on Aftermath it's scary.... *whimpers*
Oh yeah, the B/G. I don't think it would be as heavy in my mind unless Reni hadn't sent the same song to me when she was reading my in process 'Road Trip' story.
I think it should be fine, sweeie. It's very, very hot...so shouldn't he take off those pants?
::: crosses arms over chest, tapping foot irritably:::
Evil? EVIL? Really, both of you. It's very rude to call people names behind their backs, and you just never know who might come along and read these things....
Wonderful, dear. Just wonderful.
GAH
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Lay it on me sister - no critique - no changes?
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And is Giles quoting the lyrics...or is this him being inspired. I admit that I was a teeny bit jarred, um, since I was planning on using the hand behind your head thing as a description of him as a lover in a fic of mine....but I don't think that some one who was unfamiliar with the song would notice, because the imagery is quite beautiful....
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No it's not him quoting the lyrics, that's why I kind of had a little creative license with them - it's meant to be his words - but does that not work you think?
Reni got me hooked on this song a week ago and we have been talking about writing a fic based on it. She started and then got very frustrated - and then i gave a suggestion and then before I knew it she had practically forced the task on me *grin*. It scared the hell out of me and I struggled for days! Then she comes and tears down my writer's block and my muse came back today! Phew - it was terrifying. And please, this song is so amazing - I hope to see the line in your fic as well. BG fic right??? NOt WG fic right??? You got me so damn hooked on Aftermath it's scary.... *whimpers*
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I think it should be fine, sweeie. It's very, very hot...so shouldn't he take off those pants?
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And yes the pants.....it would make the logistics a little difficult if he kept them on huh? Wait and see my dear, wait and see.
Oh, and whop LG's butt into action...I am going through withdrawal here *whines annoyingly*
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Evil? EVIL? Really, both of you. It's very rude to call people names behind their backs, and you just never know who might come along and read these things....
::: weepy sniffle::: No one loves me.
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he he - no no - we still love you even though we talk about you behind your back *grin*
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So, um...momentarily ignoring the fact that I'm being insulted...how IS the Road Trip fic coming along????
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I'm working on it...not quite done with it yet....
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