Comments | agriope23: FIC:Drowning

agriope23

FIC:Drowning

Mar 18, 2007 18:04

Title: Drowning
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: John/Teyla
Main Characters: John, Teyla, tiny bit of Ronon and Rodney
Genre: Angst
Summary: It's so hard to get past her resentment.
Spoilers: Nothing special.
Disclaimer: No copyright infringement is intended.I was going to write fluff, then I read the story by seldear with Teyla stuck in the city and this came ( Read more... )

john/teyla, fic

Comments 8

2bluaeryn March 19 2007, 06:50:20 UTC

Interesting. It would be a nice follow-up to see this from Teyla's POV...any chance of that??

Also resolution of her fear/unwillingness to commit.

Very good.

agriope23 March 19 2007, 21:38:03 UTC

Hadn't planned on one, but I've never been one to refuse a prompt so best thing I can do is say I'll work on it. See if the mood comes over me again... I'm gonna travel for a few days so... let's say next week?

Glad you liked it, and a sequel might be a good way to work out the kinks. Thanx.

2bluaeryn March 20 2007, 03:00:16 UTC

Works for me 8-)

tielan March 20 2007, 10:08:08 UTC

Damn, that's good angst!

I can see this happening - the shutting out and the denial - both in here and in John-In-The-Box. It works for their characters, because they've got a lot of stuff pent up and stored in.

Really love this. (Thank heavens you and others are writing - it's been a long, hard gap between really good authors!)

agriope23 April 2 2007, 19:19:51 UTC

I seem to run into you a lot so I forget to reply but thank you and glad I could return the favor (providing you with good stories).

tielan April 2 2007, 20:57:38 UTC

That would be because I'm trying to encourage you to write more John/Teyla! :)

goddess09807 March 21 2007, 02:20:55 UTC

Me again.....

Really love this and absolutely love: But Teyla will never admit or commit to anything, to him. She’ll keep running and he’ll run right behind her. Because yes, yes! This is so true to their relationship and the characterization we have so far in canon and my persoanl view of the characters ( ... )

agriope23 April 2 2007, 19:16:08 UTC

Took me too long to reply but real life happened...

I like your point, it's their similarities, their habit of keeping people away that keeps them apart.

And I have to agree with you about the cracks. Joe Flannigan is excellent at throwing those shifty looks, arms crossed, John trying to hide his emotions, hoping no one sees. Well,we have screens so...

I've often wondered who was running after whom? Who was denying the relationship? John or Teyla? And if you're right about the projection, then I'll need to think this through some more.

I just browsed too and recognized Unchartered Territory so I'll friend you back.