I'm pretty sure you're not supposed to make me feel sorry for your serial killer. But DAMN.
Well done. *claps* That poor son of a bitch.
Also, I'm reading the fourth Cal Leandros book by Rob Thurman (
robgoodfella), and she's done something here that you don't get to see in published fiction very often--she's got two first person POV characters alternating chapters.
Have I mentioned my first-person squee-age here? Maybe? I love first person. If I could get away with first person POV in all my fiction, I'd so use it, all the time.
In fact...
I just had a thought, about the not!Iron Man. Seeing as how the length makes it nearly unpublishable as-is, maybe I'll play with POV in that. Because I have alternating POV scenes in it, and I love love love the idea. I've done it before with success in fanfic...