Monday Maunderings.

[agilebrit]

Have a real snippet, this week. I'm cutting it not for length, but subject matter.

Comments

[appomattoxco]

It's raining yet again. I'm hurting too much to look at anything with an edge right now.

[agilebrit]

*gentle hugs* Then you don't want to read this. I wish I had something fluffy to send your way, but I apparently don't roll that way anymore.

[garnigal]

Lovely and sad, with just enough sarcasm that it's still Ben.

[agilebrit]

I JUST WANT TO SNUGGLE HIM.

Not that he wants snuggling. He wants a TARDIS...

[lady_moriel]

He does? Man, I'm right there with him, then. Uh, can we see him and someone else geeking out over Doctor Who, then? Because that would be awesome.

[agilebrit]

Poor puppy:
"Hey, Ben. You all right, man?" Alex asked.
"Not particularly."
"What do you need?"
"For the last two and a half months to not have happened."
"Sorry, my time machine's in the shop."

... I wonder if I could get away with calling it a TARDIS. Because that would be awesome.

[ebenstone]

It's very, very strong. I'm not overly familiar with the story...sorry, I've got my own fishes I'm frying, though I am trying to be better at this sort of thing...anyway, I love the tone of this. It really works for me...I feel the conflict and desperation he's feeling in this. I can't decide if I like the sentence structure/paragraphing. (It could be a LJ formatting thing.) If it's not...I get it, I just don't know if I like it.

It's very good. I hope that helps!

[agilebrit]

Thank you! *squints* Ben gets fragment-y when he's stressed, and he's under a hell of a lot of stress at this moment. In fact, this scene should be even more fragment-y than it is.

See, this is why I post snippets like this. Because comments knock stuff loose. :)