One more editing pass...
DONE.
I realized today that I'd better put something in there about what wolfsbane does in my 'verse and why the Bad Guys didn't use it on not!Harry when they had him. But, you know, they've got him tied down by eleven points with a twelfth they can bring into play across his throat if need be, so using a net woven from wolfsbane to stop him Changing isn't actually necessary. Especially considering the side effects. *evil laughter* Why yes. This is me, using not!Harry as My Favorite Punching Bag™ again.
Because I'm planning on using this stuff in the next thing (if there is a next thing), so I'd better plan for it in this one, otherwise people would be saying "But why didn't BadGuyDoc use it on him when she's at the bleeding edge of what makes vamps and weres tick?"
I also fixed the defib paddles issue, and the issue with the thing that made my "brilliant" doctor look like a frelling moron at first glance. I've also cleared up some stuff about the industrial espionage, although that...may still need work. Strike that "may;" it definitely does need work.
And I'm still pondering the timing of not!Harry's captivity in Afghanistan. Three years, which is where it is now? Or two...
I've been thinking about doing a Sherlock Holmes post with heavy spoilers from the March script (which I have!). There is so much wank about this movie...
In fact, there was wank all over the place today, from fandom to politics and also encompassing both. And I'm firmly keeping my mouth shut on the fandom part because I suspect that my opinion will be *cough* unpopular. Suffice to say that all this SRS BZNS stuff just had me sitting back and shaking my head.
I realized today that I'd better put something in there about what wolfsbane does in my 'verse and why the Bad Guys didn't use it on not!Harry when they had him. But, you know, they've got him tied down by eleven points with a twelfth they can bring into play across his throat if need be, so using a net woven from wolfsbane to stop him Changing isn't actually necessary. Especially considering the side effects. *evil laughter* Why yes. This is me, using not!Harry as My Favorite Punching Bag™ again.
Because I'm planning on using this stuff in the next thing (if there is a next thing), so I'd better plan for it in this one, otherwise people would be saying "But why didn't BadGuyDoc use it on him when she's at the bleeding edge of what makes vamps and weres tick?"
I also fixed the defib paddles issue, and the issue with the thing that made my "brilliant" doctor look like a frelling moron at first glance. I've also cleared up some stuff about the industrial espionage, although that...may still need work. Strike that "may;" it definitely does need work.
And I'm still pondering the timing of not!Harry's captivity in Afghanistan. Three years, which is where it is now? Or two...
I've been thinking about doing a Sherlock Holmes post with heavy spoilers from the March script (which I have!). There is so much wank about this movie...
In fact, there was wank all over the place today, from fandom to politics and also encompassing both. And I'm firmly keeping my mouth shut on the fandom part because I suspect that my opinion will be *cough* unpopular. Suffice to say that all this SRS BZNS stuff just had me sitting back and shaking my head.