I've managed to set up not!Harry's fragility a whole lot better, without having to resort to adding an extra scene. Not!Harmony is a great viewpoint character for this, because she's lived with him for eighteen months and can compare and contrast how he was before the bad guys took him to how he is now. Poor fellow. So I've added some to
this scene, so he proves that he's a hell of a lot more self-aware than you might think at first blush, and that, yeah, he's physically okay (as far as he knows *evil laughter*) but his psyche is going to take a lot longer to recover.
If it ever does.