Comments | agentsands: 'Nother Newbie

lurkerlynne in agentsands

'Nother Newbie

Nov 20, 2003 22:16

Um, hi! I've been lurking around here for, oh, quite a while now, enjoying all the fics adn stuff. I got bit by the Sel (Sands/El) muse a little while back and decided to post. I'm very much new at this, so if I've goofed anywhere please let me know. And if anybody has any hints or tips, I'd like to hear 'em too ( Read more... )

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marquesate November 21 2003, 00:17:37 UTC

I really did like this! I adore everything dark and bittersweet and beautiful, and yes, this was beautful indeed.

lurkerlynne November 21 2003, 22:11:24 UTC

Kinda like dark chocolate, isn't it?

I think these two might be my favorites of all I've done. So far, anyway. You just can't beat a good legend.

Or the death of the lives that created the legend.

marquesate November 22 2003, 04:20:32 UTC

Oh yes, like my favourite chocolate of all times: Lindt 85% Dark Extra Fine. :-)

circe_tigana November 21 2003, 09:12:26 UTC

The's body spasmed, then relaxed. Holding the limp corpse tight, Sands set the timer of the explosives in the bag. They weren't going to be taken and he had no intention of leaving anything for the Cunts In Action to put on display.

He could hear footsteps moving their way. Sands cursed at the timer, trying to remember what he had set it to. He had a maraichi to find in whatever hell they wound up in and can we fucking get *on* with it already?!

The explosion took out two city blocks.

Whoa. That was really really powerful. I adore this image!

lurkerlynne November 21 2003, 22:16:12 UTC

Glad ya liked it. I've wondered if I ended that too abrubtly, but then, explosion. Isn't that just a Sands-way to end a fight?

Oddly enough, the first thing I noticed when I read your comment is- I spelled mariachi wrong. ::fixes fic::

circe_tigana November 22 2003, 07:14:22 UTC

Hee. God, I hate it when I do that?

And no, the ending was awesome. Not too abrupt at all.