Fic: Empire State of Mind - Chapter 7: Two Become One - Part 1

[agentb81]

Title:  Empire State of Mind - Chapter 7: Two Become One
Author: agentb81 & lizzylizbian
Fandom: Glee
Pairing: Brittany/Santana
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 10900
Disclaimer: Glee is copyrighted and belongs to the creators and Fox. As this work is an interpretation of the original material and not
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Comments

[freakykaethe]

wow.. just WOW!
What an update, loved every single line. Heck, every word!
Santana being nervous at the beginning was just so cute and then Brittany being surprised by her parents! First I was like, shit what's gonna happen now? What about their dinner plans? And then I was SO relieved when they said they didn't wanna change the plans they already made. lol
Was super surprised they came to the restaurant as well though, didn't expect that at all :O I wonder what will happen when they all celebrate Britts birthday together :X
The end though, the dinner, their admission of love and then them making love. So very beautiful! Definitely THE most fave chapter :)

Also I have to say that while reading this it did not at all feel like it was written by two people. I mean it did not feel like two parts forced together but rather like it all belonged together. Tbh would I not have know that you & lizzylizbian both wrote this, just by reading it I would've thought that this fic was written by only one person.
I hope you get what I'm trying to say here xD I feel like I can't really express it properly right now. Still in awe of the beauty you presented here!

So yeah, very well done! Like I said, I loved it :) Compliments to the both of you :)

[agentb81]

Hi, thank you for the epic comment, I really appreciate the effort! Before I continue I want to make sure you've read the second part of this chapter, the link is above the comments at the end of the post.

I'm pleased it's your favourite chapter, it's both mine and Lizzy's favourite too. I'm so honoured she agreed to write this with me and so happy you like it and the fact you would have thought it was written by one person is a massive compliment to both of us, particularly Lizzy because she was a little nervous about it! I totally get what you're saying and it's so lovely to read, so thank you so much :)

[freakykaethe]

omg so embarrassing! I seriously overlooked that link :X I think I was too amazed by the awesomeness of this!
Well.. now I'm happy all over again to read part 2 :D
Thanks :)

[agentb81]

lol, don't worry about it, thought I would point it out just in case ;) enjoy part 2!