Title: Empire State of Mind - Chapter 4: Tiptoe
Author: agentb81
Fandom: Glee
Pairing: Brittany/Santana
Rating: generally 15 - R (may reach NC-17 in some chapters)
Word Count: 7000
Disclaimer: Glee is copyrighted and belongs to the creators and Fox. As this work is an interpretation of the original material and not for-profit, it constitutes
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love love loved this! a wonderful follow-up to the last chapter. how you went back to what makes san san and britt britt. even the way it started out, like a split screen of the two of them, doing what they do. britt dancing (and figuring out san) + san methodically cleaning up a mess (and letting her mind wander back to britt).
san's past history with her two best friends tied in nicely. it added something important to her hesitation with jumping in feet first w/britt. after being burned like that, would you really want to risk such an awesome, budding, new friendship? nicely played. ;)
and though, kurt, quinn, and rach are minor characters, i die whenever they pop up because the banter is just fantastical. i die! especially with kurt. also interesting situation w/the whole quinn thing. you've really got me curious where you're taking that. hmmm...
okay, now on to the second half. it was just perfection. britt distracting her with that comment... bold! playful, brittany-esqu boldness! then following it up with the salmon comment. you slay me woman.
i felt like they really connected over the accident. the concern dripping from britt. the care. and san accepting it. when they curled up on the bed together :::swoon::: and it was all so sweet and lovely. i knew it was too good to last and sure enough, san catches mike saying all that stuff. ugh! awesome angst. of course, britt wouldn't have enough time to go grab her + explain.
kurt popped up again. thank god he was there. he was just the right amount of sassy and caring. glad he kept her in her seat.
and as seth22 said, 'i'm already excited for the scene where brittany tells'i can't wait to see brittany's performance. and i used the word 'see' because you are just that amazing.' i couldn't agree more! i cannot wait for that. thanks to your utterly beautiful descriptiveness it'll be amazing! hoping britt catches her eye, puts all her emotion into the performance, and it'll feeling like they're the only two people in the world. just sayin'
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I'm also running out of battery on my laptop so typing as fast as I can. But you know I appreciate everything you say and do :)
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