"Keeping Watch In The Night," Part Two

[agent_tomato]

"You're saying that I am fictional.  And not only me, but also my entire universe.  My father, my home, my friends--what few I have--are all nothing but some dead man's fancies?"

"Well, that's not really how I'd put it..."

"Yes, or no?"  Michel stopped walking and whirled around to face Sylveste.  The Agent was several inches shorter than

Comments

[hsavinien]

There was no reason...why Michel had not been sent to FicPsych for some kind of orientation, or counseling, or something. This sentence is a bit confusing. Perhaps you could rephrase it somewhat?

Very cool start, good job beginning the development of Michel's character.